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FF-"DESIRE"--Part 12"the Prom night"part-2 pg 47 (Page 47)

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Posted: 17 June 2011 at 12:37pm | IP Logged
Hey teacher ji Hug

though i am not first to comment but i was first to read before updating ROFL

my last comment on your FF Embarrassed

i am kinda disappointment by you...even after i said i need more chapters but you ended it Disapprove

Ending was Awesome n i loved it Clap Star Clap

i thought you will write few chaps more but no worries i know u r lazy ROFL

just loved it and no words Clap Star Clap






love ya Hug


Edited by yoga23priya - 19 June 2011 at 2:51pm

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Posted: 17 June 2011 at 12:45pm | IP Logged
Awww amazing Neha di wowww

i m speechless d way u showed passion n

love between Avi n Arpi wid such a simplycity

kya baat hai di n thanx 2 u ki aapki wajah se

mujhe yeh bahut hi amazing sa FF padhne ka mauka milla

thanx a lot luv u diEmbarrassed

Thanx again Neha diSmile...i was litle bit sad dat

u ended ur FF but i knw dat u will again come back

wid another one so All The Best n yes aapko aana

hoga apne naye idea ke sath i will be w8ing for it

di come back soon wid new "Masterpiece"Smile


Edited by jasveensokhi - 18 June 2011 at 12:11pm

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Posted: 17 June 2011 at 1:28pm | IP Logged
Esse kahthe hain grand finale...complete with rain,dance and romance...
Jo the end was as beutiful as the rest...emotional and funny...
My favourite part was offcourse the part you dedicated to me...wherein Arpita and Avdesh talk to their respective in laws...relations thats what matters to me the most...
One character in this story that i admire the most was NP ma'am...liked her for her maturity and not loosing the faith in love even though she was cheated.
Arshikhs redeemed herself in the end which has given her respect in my eyes...
Avita has entertained me throughout...
Love you for this ff...
And waiting for more such ff's and os from you...
Love
NidhaHug

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Posted: 17 June 2011 at 8:40pm | IP Logged
Hye jo,
this part was just awesome awesome dear.
Loved each n every line of it.
Avi is just too too romantic wondering why arsh said him un romantic.
He He He uske sath kaise romantic hota he does'nt love her at all.
Loved u bought N.P.mam again.
Chotu was also nice and avi's idea was too good.
The complete part was realy like surprise package b'coz it was full of cute & sweet surprises.
Loved avi & arpi convo a lot.

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Posted: 17 June 2011 at 9:00pm | IP Logged
Hye again u asked which part loved the most and hate the most,

this ff's all parts are my fav but the best one was the 'Mesmerizing night' aha i just loved that b'coz i like romantic things alot the rain dance,avitas convo,and that shayri of avi "jane kya baat hai teri aankho mein".
And this last part also is my fav one.

I had never hated any b'coz every part was wid a valid reason.
But the sad part was 'shadows turn alive' when arshi came
back.
If u have any other ideas in mind do write it after exams we will love to read it.
All the best for ur exams.

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Posted: 18 June 2011 at 4:02am | IP Logged
Neha !!!!!!!!HugHug

Both the prom night parts are so awesome !!ClapClap

Amazing work indeed..Thumbs UpThumbs Up

& the last part of the date made me blush..BlushingBlushing

Avi is so romantic !!Day DreamingDay Dreaming

Love ya Neha for giving us such a beautiful FF..StarStar






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SP, Im short of Ideas.. How will I update?

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Posted: 18 June 2011 at 10:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Nidhsara

Esse kahthe hain grand finale...complete with rain,dance and romance...
Jo the end was as beutiful as the rest...emotional and funny...
My favourite part was offcourse the part you dedicated to me...wherein Arpita and Avdesh talk to their respective in laws...relations thats what matters to me the most...
One character in this story that i admire the most was NP ma'am...liked her for her maturity and not loosing the faith in love even though she was cheated.
Arshikhs redeemed herself in the end which has given her respect in my eyes...
Avita has entertained me throughout...
Love you for this ff...
And waiting for more such ff's and os from you...
Love
NidhaHug

Hey Nidha dear thankyou sooo much for liking the last part too

n special biiig kissiii for commenting dear as u all know how bad i m in romance writing n here i tried my best in it Ouch 

so ur all's comments meant alot for me,

about ur fav part thanx for liking it yaar, u know for me love is only love n its incomplete if u have to hurt ur or the guy's family for aachieving it, n while that part i was suspecious whether u guys like it or find it  bouring n i dedicated that part to u bz in ur FF i love the way u discribe all relations ,

sorry yaar i read ur last lovely UD but till now not commented yet as i have only few mins to visit forum or mom will kill me heheLOL

n about ur fav cheracters thanx for liking NP n Chote u know NP mam''s cheracter i drew from my LU teacher hope no one else know her here LOL or she can sue me LOL

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