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FF-"DESIRE"--Part 12"the Prom night"part-2 pg 47 (Page 39)

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Posted: 05 June 2011 at 9:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by yoga23priya

Originally posted by joliefille

Originally posted by yoga23priya

Originally posted by joliefille

Originally posted by yoga23priya

res Angry

Now why this RES with "AngryConfusedConfusedConfused


stupid jo

i mad at you Angry

i asked you not to update till i come Angry

oh god u r mad at me , on me poor soul CryCry

u know i don't know how long i can stay here for now n for next few days CryCry

n you r mad at meCry if i didn't UD it then i can't do it n btw when did u forbid me from doing thatConfused


check this i wrote pg 57

yaar jo kya tum mere shadi ko bar baad karna chati ho AngryLOL

also don't forget i have a baby too LOL

anyways i will be leaving also 

mom wants to me leave to hospital around 7:30 am

take care

love you Hug

PS don't Update till i come at 9 Angry

you said you will come to online daily after exams right so no worries Wink

ooops i didn't saw it last night .n about ur wifey n baby they know u too , 

n don't want to interfere anyone's family matterDisapprove 

@black bold ya i will n i m not leaving it forever nowAngry 

exams in july so can't come for long timeOuch

n second thing is i m scared what if i don't find forum after exams CryCry

what will  i do????Cry

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Posted: 05 June 2011 at 11:15am | IP Logged
amazing ff... ClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClap
absolutely brilliant!! i just started readin it yday and have been hooked ever since.
the way u describe avitas deep rooted luv for each other is rlly over whelming... literally im tearing up... is tht the end??? plz dnt make it the end we need a happy ending... and avita scenes!!
but hats off to u the best writer by far!!!!

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Posted: 05 June 2011 at 1:24pm | IP Logged
Omg, Neha, thanks for dedicating this update to me and Priya. I feel blessed this week to be loved so much, thanks for continuing the update. I will comment after reading the update. 

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Posted: 05 June 2011 at 1:45pm | IP Logged
Neha, thanks for this fabulous update. I actually forgot about RV and his situation but it's nice to see you close all loose ends. Arpi's father's behavior was not wrong he needs time to understand the situation. Both RV and Arshika must confess their deeds. It's great to see Shika again even for a minor dialogue. Avi is deeply in love with Arpi and he will do anything. Your ff flows beautifully, I love it. Arpi's cure will take time but Avi will be there for her. I can't wait for the next update. Avi has changed and grown so much as a character from the beginning of this ff, this is thanks to you and your creativity. I can feel the vibrations of their powerful love.

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Posted: 06 June 2011 at 11:47am | IP Logged
Hyeee,
my hye got to long b'coz of the jhatkas u all are giving.

For avita just can say
"ye zalim duniya wale kya jane pyar ko".
Bechari arpi hospital mein abhi-abhi thik hui hai and all started taunting her but no worries avi is wid her so together they can fight wid the world.

I just forget about devil rv he is still alive he he he.
Waise where is arshika now if she will confess everything will be fine.

Well jo these days are quiet hard for me a little busy so not coming on the IF much hope u understand
take care.

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Posted: 07 June 2011 at 1:59pm | IP Logged
Updated my post on page 38Big smile
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Posted: 08 June 2011 at 3:07pm | IP Logged
update plz eagerly waitng...Day Dreaming
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Posted: 08 June 2011 at 10:49pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by 1qr4h

amazing ff... Clap
absolutely brilliant!! i just started readin it yday and have been hooked ever since.
the way u describe avitas deep rooted luv for each other is rlly over whelming... literally im tearing up... is tht the end??? plz dnt make it the end we need a happy ending... and avita scenes!!
but hats off to u the best writer by far!!!!


hey 1qr4h hehe i don't know ur good name Embarrassed

first of all thanx for commenting dear, Embarrassed n then thanx for liking it, nop its not end yet few more updates in the way hope u will enjoy them tooEmbarrassed

hehe n about the best writer n all i really don't think so , i will sugges you to read other FFs n OS on forum they just rock i m learning from them, n for ur sweet n kind words i m really very greatfull , thanx once again n plz keep commenting here on each FF u like .Smile

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