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FF-"DESIRE"--Part 12"the Prom night"part-2 pg 47 (Page 30)

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Posted: 07 May 2011 at 11:34am | IP Logged
NehhhaaaHugHug

So..Finally Im unresing itLOL


As a writer, Your story is amazing though its heart- wrenchingCryCryCry

The part is extremely beautifulEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

I literally had tears in my eyesCry 

I agree, we dont gt true love in real life...

As a viewer, I really want Avita to be together no matter what it takes...Let there be a miracle...Embarrassed
Plz...unite them...I have lost my hope on CVs ..caz they wont listen usAngryAngry The way show is going...Im afraid there will be a tragic endingCryCryCry

    


Im fan of your wrtingStar
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One request...Plzzz unite themEmbarrassed

Love ya...

                                  
                                      





Edited by prash_t - 13 May 2011 at 10:33pm

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Posted: 07 May 2011 at 11:34am | IP Logged
Teacher Ji Hug

look who is editing her posts ROFL

coming to my very very very precious comments i don't what to say Confused ROFL

Arshikha slapped Arpi Shocked Ouch Angry Angry

i was right that RV and Arshikha planned it Evil Smile

i loved the way you portray feeling of losing someone you...i have to take tips from you Tragic Queen...Embarrassed


Love you Hug



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Posted: 07 May 2011 at 11:35am | IP Logged
Hey Neha di i literaly had tears i n mah eyes 

wow amazing work luved d way u tried 2 

show emotions of Avi n Arpi a big hug from meh

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Edited by jasveensokhi - 30 May 2011 at 11:30am

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Posted: 07 May 2011 at 12:19pm | IP Logged
Neha, U Updated.. Yaay.. I'll read & Comment later. Lubb U lots

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Wow, Neha what a lovely and heart breaking update. I don't want Arpi to die. if miracles are possible, please give her another life, don't let Avita depart like Romeo and Juliet. We already know that their love is pure. I am already shattered by the news of GKD conclusion, please give me this minor happiness in knowing the victory of Avita's love. I wont throw chappals at you but beg your feet to give me some mercy. I feel like crying for this injustice. GKd is my love and I can stand to see it being snatched away from me. 

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neha...first let me tell you i am loving it...and the last part where arpi says those words in hindi...God i was felling those from heart...it was really good...ClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClap

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Originally posted by Sidda8

Wow, Neha what a lovely and heart breaking update. I don't want Arpi to die. if miracles are possible, please give her another life, don't let Avita depart like Romeo and Juliet. We already know that their love is pure. I am already shattered by the news of GKD conclusion, please give me this minor happiness in knowing the victory of Avita's love. I wont throw chappals at you but beg your feet to give me some mercy.Angry I feel like crying for this injustice. GKd is my love and I can stand to see it being snatched away from me. 


Siddu dear love u for  liking the updateEmbarrassed

i know this end is tragic, even i was feeling bad while writing it,Dead


@bold red u don't need to do that, ok its time to fight for our show as CB di n others says just flood imagine wall n GKD, Actors wall on FB n just tell them they r committing big mistakeAngry

i was shocked to know the bad news, as its only show i follow like crazy oneOuch

n they r doing this with usDead


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