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FF-"DESIRE"--Part 12"the Prom night"part-2 pg 47 (Page 26)

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Posted: 29 April 2011 at 12:19pm | IP Logged
Hye jo,

dhagardham part dear,well rv needs that only and now he is in hospital ha ha ha.
In this u made me surprised alot as u are doing from last few parts,but this time everything was going so so well avi beaten rv then avita confessed wid each other about there love in such a wonder way but that slap why why why.
Ok dear i will be waiting to see the next part.

Edited by Cuty16 - 03 May 2011 at 10:29am

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Posted: 29 April 2011 at 2:25pm | IP Logged
Just wanted to drop a line to say the story is awesome...very interesting!! :)

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Posted: 30 April 2011 at 12:02am | IP Logged
wowww jo this is very nice part
yaar gkd forum pr itne saare achhe ache writer haina ki mere paas toh shabdo ki kami ho gayi hai...LOLLOLLOLLOL
 thsi part is extremly well written...ClapClapClapClapClapClap
plzzz pm me when u update
kai baar mere ko pata hi nahi chalta ki tumne next part update kar diya hai...ConfusedConfusedConfusedConfusedConfused
all in allClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClap


Edited by danno - 04 May 2011 at 7:39am
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Posted: 30 April 2011 at 12:42pm | IP Logged
Superb as usual Jo...emotion-action-passion packed update...loved it to the core...you hurtled us through surprises...well Arshikhs doesn't seem to be a positive character to me...i remember in the otner update when Avi told her to go home alone..you said tne expression on her face showed her true self...so can't trust Arshikha...but don't know whats her ulterioir motive though...waiting eagerly for next one

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Posted: 02 May 2011 at 10:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sidda8

OMG, Neha this update is absolutely superb. Avita has found out that they love each other but Arpi is not reading to move on because of her Di. Poor Avi is heart broken continuously. I don't know what he is going to do but hopefully all their misunderstanding resolves.

thanx sidda dear,

ya finally they realized their feelings,
 but  still thay don't know how to express it even avi can't explain his love , what he feels for Arpi is abov all that words can express, so he just tried to expresse thenm without words.EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
Embarrassed

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Posted: 02 May 2011 at 2:24pm | IP Logged
Jo i edited my post in Pg 20 and 25

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Posted: 03 May 2011 at 10:36am | IP Logged
Hye dear.
Update it soon me eagarly waiting dear u are making us mad in curiosity.
Well i expect no more twists now.

I have Updated my post on pg-26.

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Posted: 03 May 2011 at 10:46am | IP Logged
Hey Rups dear, just be prepared for biggest jhatka as its going to be ma last update so i want to clear some characters too,  Wink
n m really sorry for delay in updates i have exams dear , will update soon ,
may be in this week in two daysWink

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