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FF-"DESIRE"--Part 12"the Prom night"part-2 pg 47 (Page 23)

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Posted: 25 April 2011 at 4:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Cuty16

Hye jo,
shocking part once again but i think these hardships is necessary for making there relation more stronger.
Twists are over na or u are going to give few more jhatkas to us.
Next part will rocking well i guess some bahubali effect by avi.


 hey cuty thanx for liking it dear,
n about twists just few more Wink
u can call them jhatkas as they will be only Revelations from my sideLOL

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Posted: 25 April 2011 at 5:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by joliefille

Originally posted by Cuty16

Hye jo,
shocking part once again but i think these hardships is necessary for making there relation more stronger.
Twists are over na or u are going to give few more jhatkas to us.
Next part will rocking well i guess some bahubali effect by avi.


hey cuty thanx for liking it dear,
n about twists just few more Wink
u can call them jhatkas as they will be only Revelations from my sideLOL
no no dear pls no more jhatkas i will start crying dear at arpi's condition.
Or i will enter in your ff and throw this rv& arshika out of avitas life.
Ha ha ha just kiding dear.
But i will be waiting for the next part.

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Posted: 25 April 2011 at 7:04am | IP Logged
pyaare pyaare update padh ke dilwa beating fast
sasura chance maare
...ROFLROFL
yaar jaldi se update karo na...

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Posted: 25 April 2011 at 9:00am | IP Logged
Neha !!!!Hug

When r u going to update??Embarrassed

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Posted: 25 April 2011 at 10:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jes_jade

Neha !!!!Hug

When r u going to update??Embarrassed

sorry Jess n Sharan dearOuch

m not updating yet but going to give a pre tonightWink

hope you will like itEmbarrassed

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Posted: 25 April 2011 at 10:58am | IP Logged

Hello everyone, thankyou sooomuch for liking previous parts of "Desire"

here is a short Precap of next part hope i can match up to your expectations Embarrassed

"Avi slapped him hard "Just shut up I don't believe you"

Rv- of course you don't, you never do that, if you trusted me last time may be Arshika's rejection didn't hurt you that much, but believe me you have to trust me again when Arpita will tell you by herself that she is ashamed of her self to be your friend, bz the way you treat her tonight she never imagined that. She never liked you; it was her kindness that she allows you, to be with her n you were forcing yourself on her."


"he lifts her n now she was in air in his arms "uh.." a soft sigh accurse on her lips, Avi suddenly loose his arms n put her on ground again, "oh m I hurting you" she smiled n nod in no,"

"just get out of my sight, I don't want to see you ever in my life."
i hope u like it, n i will try to update by SaturdayEmbarrassed one more thing it can be the last part of "Desire"Embarrassed

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Posted: 25 April 2011 at 11:13am | IP Logged
nice precap Neha. Hopefully it's not Arpi telling Avi to get out of her life, already in GKD, Avi is having a hard time convincing Arpi to return to him. That Rv is always talks crap and Avi should ignore him and save Arpi.  

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Posted: 25 April 2011 at 11:37am | IP Logged
Hye jo,

Precap monday ko aur update saturday bahut naainsaafi hai.

Pls dear avi tolled to arshika na to get out of his life not to arpi.

I will Wait dear but u are making us wait so much so pls pls do something nice nice in avitas life.

If u will update on saturday then i will post my coment on monday b'coz i am having my next exam on 1st may.
Till then bye.

Edited by Cuty16 - 25 April 2011 at 11:52am

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