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FF-"DESIRE"--Part 12"the Prom night"part-2 pg 47 (Page 14)

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Posted: 11 April 2011 at 3:21am | IP Logged
Hey jo this part was awsome.....thoughthere was some problem with the font........Avita as usual rocks..........but Mr. Thakur how dare you hug someonelse...i'll give you sound thrashing nxt time you do it.....lol.........poor Arpi......but who the hell is in his arm..........waiting on tenterhooks for the next update

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Posted: 11 April 2011 at 4:09am | IP Logged
hey JO Hug

Just love it and OMG!!!!!! you are so amazing writer Clap Clap Clap



Dang you portrayed the their emotions very well and you call me master in emotions while it's you who it is Angry ROFL
i am truly impressed and proud of you dear Clap
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What a hug Joieeeee Day Dreaming Day Dreaming Day Dreaming

i know that girl is his former lover and she want's to come back his life but he is falling for Arpi..now the twist and turns...i am waiting for it and i will be the person to read it because i am gonna edit it Dancing



love ya Hug


Edited by yoga23priya - 15 April 2011 at 5:23am

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Posted: 11 April 2011 at 5:46am | IP Logged
omg this is mind blowing part i can not wait for next parts this marvelous Clap

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Posted: 11 April 2011 at 6:54am | IP Logged
omgggggggggggg
this part is also too good
that girl must be her ex gf

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Posted: 11 April 2011 at 11:24am | IP Logged
Hye jo,
i just loved this part so they started loving each other.
O i have involved a bit in your ff i can guess that girl avi's first love had returned but why she came back.

Waiting....to see next part.

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Posted: 11 April 2011 at 11:46am | IP Logged
Amazing update Neha!!!!ClapClap

It was really sweet..EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Frm the fall..till..they hug...all was so cute!!!Day DreamingDay Dreaming

Who was the girl who hugged Avi??AngryAngry
Am sure she is dat senior girl who broke his heart..Broken HeartBroken Heart

Waiting for nxt....

Plzz update soon..Big smileBig smile


Edited by jes_jade - 13 April 2011 at 1:08pm

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Posted: 11 April 2011 at 12:05pm | IP Logged
JoHugHug

Who is tht girl....OuchAngry


I think its ArshikaAngry  I dont want her to come between Avita Angry

They both are already falling for each otherEmbarrassed

Again Superb lines of Romeo- JulietStarClapClapClapClapClap


I love this playEmbarrassed




                     



Update it soooooooooooooon..

Waiting fr next partBig smile





AngryOuch

Edited by prash_t - 14 April 2011 at 2:09pm

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Posted: 11 April 2011 at 12:42pm | IP Logged
WOW JO ANOTHER VRY EXCELLENT PART BY U 

LUVED ITTTTTTTTTEmbarrassed

I REALY LIKE D WAY U PORTRAY D CHARACTER OF 

AVI N ARPI U PUT LIFE IN D CHARACTERS N WHILE 

READING I FEEL LIKE DAT I M SITTING N WATCHING 

IT ON STAGE IN REALITY  WOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

U R AWESOME Clap

(n hey i edited mah first post on page 12Big smile)


Edited by jasveensokhi - 11 April 2011 at 1:02pm

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