Gunahon Ka Devta

FF-"DESIRE"--Part 12"the Prom night"part-2 pg 47 - Page 38

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Posted: 12 years ago
Neha !!!!!!!!πŸ€—πŸ€—

Both the prom night parts are so awesome !!πŸ‘πŸ‘

Amazing work indeed..πŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌ

& the last part of the date made me blush..☺️☺️

Avi is so romantic !!😍😍

Love ya Neha for giving us such a beautiful FF..⭐️⭐️






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Posted: 12 years ago
SP, Im short of Ideas.. How will I update?
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This content was originally posted by: Nidhsara

Esse kahthe hain grand finale...complete with rain,dance and romance...

Jo the end was as beutiful as the rest...emotional and funny...
My favourite part was offcourse the part you dedicated to me...wherein Arpita and Avdesh talk to their respective in laws...relations thats what matters to me the most...
One character in this story that i admire the most was NP ma'am...liked her for her maturity and not loosing the faith in love even though she was cheated.
Arshikhs redeemed herself in the end which has given her respect in my eyes...
Avita has entertained me throughout...
Love you for this ff...
And waiting for more such ff's and os from you...
Love
NidhaπŸ€—

Hey Nidha dear thankyou sooo much for liking the last part too

n special biiig kissiii for commenting dear as u all know how bad i m in romance writing n here i tried my best in it  

so ur all's comments meant alot for me,

about ur fav part thanx for liking it yaar, u know for me love is only love n its incomplete if u have to hurt ur or the guy's family for aachieving it, n while that part i was suspecious whether u guys like it or find it  bouring n i dedicated that part to u bz in ur FF i love the way u discribe all relations ,

sorry yaar i read ur last lovely UD but till now not commented yet as i have only few mins to visit forum or mom will kill me heheπŸ˜†

n about ur fav cheracters thanx for liking NP n Chote u know NP mam''s cheracter i drew from my LU teacher hope no one else know her here πŸ˜† or she can sue me πŸ˜†

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Posted: 12 years ago
This content was originally posted by: Cuty16

Hye jo,
this part was just awesome awesome dear.
Loved each n every line of it.
Avi is just too too romantic wondering why arsh said him un romantic.
He He He uske sath kaise romantic hota he does'nt love her at all.
Loved u bought N.P.mam again.
Chotu was also nice and avi's idea was too good.
The complete part was realy like surprise package b'coz it was full of cute & sweet surprises.

Loved avi & arpi convo a lot.

hey Rups thanx for liking it dear,

yap u guessed it right Arshi ke saath romantic kaise hota πŸ˜†

aakhir ODB apne dil ki sun ke romance karenge ya confussed mind ki πŸ˜³

i m realy glad that u liked this part too 

n really very happy that u guys find it romanticπŸ˜†

rest , we will talk tomorrow ,

love ya for such sweet lovely comments dear

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Posted: 12 years ago
I unresed mah post on pg 48😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
I edited my post in Pg 39,42,47 finally and i completed editing all the res post πŸ₯³
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Yoohoo NehaπŸ₯³!! Congratulations on completing you first fanfic...sorry, I had not been regular in reading and commenting but the finale was fantabulous and I luvvved all the dialogues between Arpita and AviπŸ‘πŸ‘...very sweet and naturalπŸ˜ƒ
 
I am so glad that you gave it a happy ending...those are the best😊...happy endings, that is.
 
Very well doneπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
 
Thanks for sharing your talent with us😊
 
 
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Posted: 12 years ago
Update my Post on page 48😎
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Posted: 12 years ago

hiee Sugar pie.. πŸ€—

loved the ending..

although You know Im greedy for AviTa romance..you didnt continue with it.. 😑

but still..

loved the entire FF..

my fav part was 'Mesmerizing Night'

I hope you start another FF.. *we will force you 😈*



love you..Muah muah..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great precap Neha, it's so adorable that Avi kisses Arpi's tears so each time she cries, she gets a kiss.