FF-"DESIRE"--Part 12"the Prom night"part-2 pg 47 - Page 21

wowww jo this is very nice part
yaar gkd forum pr itne saare achhe ache writer haina ki mere paas toh shabdo ki kami ho gayi hai...😆😆😆😆
 thsi part is extremly well written...👏👏👏👏👏👏
plzzz pm me when u update
kai baar mere ko pata hi nahi chalta ki tumne next part update kar diya hai...😕😕😕😕😕
all in all👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Edited by danno - 12 years ago

Superb as usual Jo...emotion-action-passion packed update...loved it to the core...you hurtled us through surprises...well Arshikhs doesn't seem to be a positive character to me...i remember in the otner update when Avi told her to go home alone..you said tne expression on her face showed her true self...so can't trust Arshikha...but don't know whats her ulterioir motive though...waiting eagerly for next one

thanx sidda dear,

ya finally they realized their feelings,
 but  still thay don't know how to express it even avi can't explain his love , what he feels for Arpi is abov all that words can express, so he just tried to expresse thenm without words.😳😳😳
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Jo i edited my post in Pg 20 and 25

Hye dear.
Update it soon me eagarly waiting dear u are making us mad in curiosity.
Well i expect no more twists now.

I have Updated my post on pg-26.

Hey Rups dear, just be prepared for biggest jhatka as its going to be ma last update so i want to clear some characters too,  😉
n m really sorry for delay in updates i have exams dear , will update soon ,
may be in this week in two days😉

thanx for liking dear😳

hey jess dear thankyou sooomuch forliking it 😳

don't worry Arpi will realize her mistake soon😉

hey everyone thanx for liking Desire till now n sorry for the late update,

hope u all will like the pre. n coming update too😳

Avi-"That's why I m saying  'Thank you Arshika' if you excepts my foolish proposal at that time, may be till now we got married n could never realize that you were right, I don't love you, I never loved you ever, I still don't know what was that, all I know is, that when I was with you I can feel someone else in you, n today im sure you are not that person bz she ditched me today bz of you. But anyway I don't have any hard feelings for you bz just bz of you I met her."

It happened in front of his eyes, he felt like world turns dark, everything stops, his whole world shattered into fragments, he fell on knees as his own body seems him very heavy to stand , 

will try to update soon😳

Heyyy JO 🤗