Gunahon Ka Devta

FF-"DESIRE"--Part 12"the Prom night"part-2 pg 47 - Page 18

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Posted: 13 years ago
ya ya, of course🤣,
but seriously dear i want it to be my best update,
n as far about suspense so let me tell you its going to be full of action n emotions😉
ab bana kuch suspence😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
if you don't update yours by 2mrw then i will update mine by thurday ðŸ¤£ðŸ¤£ðŸ¤£ðŸ¤£
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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: yoga23priya

if you don't update yours by 2mrw then i will update mine by thurday ðŸ¤£


Priyaaa you are threatening me
oohooh my poor heart is badly hurt😭
 dear mine is not completed yet but i know urs is done,😉

but just bz u r saying i will give a pre tomorrow but update after ur update,😉

hehehe, pre after pre n update after update😈
or "ek baar jo maine comitment kar di to fir main apne aap ki bhi nahi sunti"😉🤣🤣🤣🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hye jo,
shocking part once again but i think these hardships is necessary for making there relation more stronger.
Twists are over na or u are going to give few more jhatkas to us.
Next part will rocking well i guess some bahubali effect by avi.

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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: Cuty16

Hye jo,
shocking part once again but i think these hardships is necessary for making there relation more stronger.
Twists are over na or u are going to give few more jhatkas to us.
Next part will rocking well i guess some bahubali effect by avi.


 hey cuty thanx for liking it dear,
n about twists just few more 😉
u can call them jhatkas as they will be only Revelations from my side😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: joliefille


hey cuty thanx for liking it dear,
n about twists just few more 😉
u can call them jhatkas as they will be only Revelations from my side😆

no no dear pls no more jhatkas i will start crying dear at arpi's condition.
Or i will enter in your ff and throw this rv& arshika out of avitas life.
Ha ha ha just kiding dear.
But i will be waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 13 years ago
pyaare pyaare update padh ke dilwa beating fast
sasura chance maare
...🤣🤣
yaar jaldi se update karo na...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Neha !!!!🤗

When r u going to update??😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: jes_jade

Neha !!!!🤗

When r u going to update??😳


sorry Jess n Sharan dear

m not updating yet but going to give a pre tonight😉

hope you will like it😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hello everyone, thankyou sooomuch for liking previous parts of "Desire"

here is a short Precap of next part hope i can match up to your expectations 😳

"Avi slapped him hard "Just shut up I don't believe you"

Rv- of course you don't, you never do that, if you trusted me last time may be Arshika's rejection didn't hurt you that much, but believe me you have to trust me again when Arpita will tell you by herself that she is ashamed of her self to be your friend, bz the way you treat her tonight she never imagined that. She never liked you; it was her kindness that she allows you, to be with her n you were forcing yourself on her."


"he lifts her n now she was in air in his arms "uh.." a soft sigh accurse on her lips, Avi suddenly loose his arms n put her on ground again, "oh m I hurting you" she smiled n nod in no,"

"just get out of my sight, I don't want to see you ever in my life."
i hope u like it, n i will try to update by Saturday😳 one more thing it can be the last part of "Desire"😳