FF-"DESIRE"--Part 12"the Prom night"part-2 pg 47 - Page 11

Hey Joliefille!
Enjoyed this part too though it is difficult to read as there is some formatting problem.

oh dear,
I hate this net server just messed it up,
Will try to fix it soon, don't know what to do, thats why didn't updated the first pg n title,
Hope by eve can do something.

Hey jo this part was awsome.....thoughthere was some problem with the font........Avita as usual rocks..........but Mr. Thakur how dare you hug someonelse...i'll give you sound thrashing nxt time you do it.....lol.........poor Arpi......but who the hell is in his arm..........waiting on tenterhooks for the next update

love ya 🤗
Edited by yoga23priya - 13 years ago

omg this is mind blowing part i can not wait for next parts this marvelous 👏

omgggggggggggg
this part is also too good
that girl must be her ex gf

Hye jo,
i just loved this part so they started loving each other.
O i have involved a bit in your ff i can guess that girl avi's first love had returned but why she came back.

Waiting....to see next part.

Amazing update Neha!!!!👏👏

It was really sweet..😳😳

Frm the fall..till..they hug...all was so cute!!!😍😍

Who was the girl who hugged Avi??😡😡
Am sure she is dat senior girl who broke his heart..🥺🥺

Waiting for nxt....

Plzz update soon..😃😃
Edited by jes_jade - 13 years ago

Jo🤗🤗

Who is tht girl....😡


I think its Arshika😡  I dont want her to come between Avita 😡

They both are already falling for each other😳

Again Superb lines of Romeo- Juliet⭐️👏👏👏👏👏


I love this play😳




                     



Update it soooooooooooooon..

Waiting fr next part😃




😡Edited by prash_t - 13 years ago

WOW JO ANOTHER VRY EXCELLENT PART BY U  Edited by jasveensokhi - 13 years ago