FF-"DESIRE"--Part 12"the Prom night"part-2 pg 47 - Page 8

hey Jo 🤗 Edited by yoga23priya - 13 years ago

right now hav to go
byiii good night
cyaa,
and priya just luv you yaar
i know i m sounding mad na,hehehe
its ur ff's effect.

What a lucky day!!!!

Another update!!!!

I am just speechless!!!👏👏
Just want to hug u for ur update.......🤗🤗
It was mindblowing!!👏👏
The way u expressed AVITA's feelings were just amazing!!👍🏼👍🏼

Really eager to read the Romeo-Juliet part!!

Plzz cont soon!!!!!😳😳
Edited by jes_jade - 13 years ago

Hye,
today both the updates were just to sweet and touchy.

Well i wonder avi must had watched arpi in rain when he had closed his eyes.

NP MAM will bring them together well i guess.
Avita first fighted then become friends then close friends and now the love part next is just waiting for them.
Too too good thankyou dear updating it soon.Edited by Cuty16 - 13 years ago

jo this is great you did a wondurful job 👏👏👏

Oh Neha, you took my breath away............it was so beautiful.........Avi - Arpi conversation at night in the hospital room ..........

Superb jo........loved it...Avita was soooooo emotional.........love you update soon

Updated My post on Page 10  😳

Wow Neha.. U updated. Let me read & Comment.

hey neha,
this part is just awesome..............................
romio and juliet ...............
love shove aur bhi bad jayegaa
wowwwww
waiting for that part