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BreakPoint (Maneet FF)- Epilogue added (pg 122) (Page 70)

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Posted: 30 March 2011 at 8:25am | IP Logged
lovely update gb......i guess geet had a child from maan...............

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Posted: 30 March 2011 at 8:25am | IP Logged
Loving the story!!

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Posted: 30 March 2011 at 8:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by --Nargis--

Oh oh...i smell a reconciliation of sorts...maybe a heart to heart coming?Tongue

That has to start now...how much they can hide behind..Farak nahin padta.....a
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Posted: 30 March 2011 at 8:57am | IP Logged


Gosh ! That was awesome . I think Geet  has a baby from Maan Wink
Just a WILD guess ; don't mind me , me bad  @ making guesses Ouch.

Short yet a very powerful update Clap   Clap    Clap . Loved Geet's curtness in her talks & her attitude with Maan. These 5 years have done her good in terms of maturity & self - control . Very important attributes of any dignified woman Thumbs Up Thumbs Up . Am glad she made him understand " what goes around , comes around " . 

Like he abandoned her after she poured out her feelings & left her miserable , she also abandoned him after that fateful night when he finally confessed  her & submitted himself completely .

These aspects were flawlessly brought out in the events of your story . A very commendable job ... Star   Star    Star

BRILLIANT part & loved it .....

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Posted: 30 March 2011 at 9:36am | IP Logged
u dsrv a big WOW!!!!
nice update..hv xpctd dis abt geet's claiming of rehan as her fiancee.
thnx 4 da pm..do cnt.
de ghumak!! :)
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Posted: 30 March 2011 at 9:38am | IP Logged
Originally posted by gawdygory



Gosh ! That was awesome . I think Geet  has a baby from Maan Wink
Just a WILD guess ; don't mind me , me bad  @ making guesses Ouch.

Short yet a very powerful update Clap   Clap    Clap . Loved Geet's curtness in her talks & her attitude with Maan. These 5 years have done her good in terms of maturity & self - control . Very important attributes of any dignified woman Thumbs Up Thumbs Up . Am glad she made him understand " what goes around , comes around " . 

Like he abandoned her after she poured out her feelings & left her miserable , she also abandoned him after that fateful night when he finally confessed  her & submitted himself completely .

These aspects were flawlessly brought out in the events of your story . A very commendable job ... Star   Star    Star

BRILLIANT part & loved it .....


Yes..true looks like that is happening......I hope I am able to bring out Geet's POV clearly without making her villain....

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Posted: 30 March 2011 at 9:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by debomaaneet

u dsrv a big WOW!!!!
nice update..hv xpctd dis abt geet's claiming of rehan as her fiancee.
thnx 4 da pm..do cnt.
de ghumak!! :)

Yes..Poor Rehan...I decided to keep that open from day 1 ..that he is her fake fiancee....so it will be interesting to see Maan takes him in coming parts...


Edited by goldenball - 30 March 2011 at 10:01am
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Posted: 30 March 2011 at 11:34am | IP Logged
Vaise.... I don't mind playing role of your fiancee.......but let Sanjida know about it...she may get wrong ideas....."

She smiled...she had tears in her eyes.."Yes...I will tell her..."



 
 
Who's Sanjida.. may be their daughter....???????

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