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BreakPoint (Maneet FF)- Epilogue added (pg 122) (Page 37)

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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 11:04pm | IP Logged
i wanna see dev to be beaten n thrashed by maan yaar Angry

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Originally posted by -dia-

wonderful update..............love it!!!!

feeling sorry for geet,for proving her love she needs to undergo this much.

its time for maan to prove his love nd win her back!!!


Yes that is what he will do now...in chapter 7...he decides for her...but winning her trust will take time...and I am not going to make it that easy.....Angry

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Originally posted by sanjh1234

i wanna see dev to be beaten n thrashed by maan yaar Angry
Good thought....but i will not like Maan wasting time on him...instead he should put focus on Geet..to bring her out of trauma.
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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 11:08pm | IP Logged
So dev is willing to give her divorce nd she is going hp but will her family let her take divorce????
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Even in due time...Geet does forgive Maan....how will Maan ever forgive himself???Dead

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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 11:09pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by jazzerette

@Part7...I had kept my breath held throughout the update...and only relaxed when I read Geet is going to be free of Dev. Btw...doesn't Dadima know about Dev's torture? What is her take on this? 
 
Yes..i didn't wanted to hang-on too much on Dev... so ...thats why I fast forwarded..(This I have learnt from GHSPTongue )....
 
Is Dadi ma that important....? .I am planning to put some on her repentance in next chapter ..but not much..she has no major role to play...in further story.

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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 11:10pm | IP Logged
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Ooooooooooooooo...Chapter 7....yeh..i didn't have to wait at all..Thanks!!!  Will read and comment!!

Adding comments for chapter 7...........it was too short....very waiting fo rthe next part soon!!  Sorry for the greed!!Big smile

Wow....what to say....this Daadima is a totally passive one...no?  How can she just stand by all of these months and watch Geet suffer so at the hands of Dev??  Doesn't she she what he does to her?  Doesn't she wonder why Geet does not come out of her room?

Maan....wow Dev se divorce dilwa ke mukti mil jayegi???  Angry


Sorry...mein bahut badi FEMINIST hoon!!
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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 11:18pm | IP Logged
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Ooooooooooooooo...Chapter 7....yeh..i didn't have to wait at all..Thanks!!!  Will read and comment!!

Adding comments for chapter 7...........it was too short....very waiting fo rthe next part soon!!  Sorry for the greed!!Big smile

Wow....what to say....this Daadima is a totally passive one...no?  How can she just stand by all of these months and watch Geet suffer so at the hands of Dev??  Doesn't she she what he does to her?  Doesn't she wonder why Geet does not come out of her room?

Maan....wow Dev se divorce dilwa ke mukti mil jayegi???  Angry


Sorry...mein bahut badi FEMINIST hoon!!
No...abhi toh story suru hui hain....How he wins her back..her trust her love....I just wanted to use this...if Geet troubled past was becos of Maan..then how the story will evolve...and webbed with strong feminist POV.... that marriage doesn't make anyone your husband....
About Dadi...she is having passive role...and no role in further story...

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