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BreakPoint (Maneet FF)- Epilogue added (pg 122) (Page 133)

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Posted: 13 April 2011 at 5:06am | IP Logged
loved it
awesome ff
loved every part of it
come up with other ff soon
thank you for sharing this one with us

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Posted: 13 April 2011 at 5:33am | IP Logged
Awesome update... loved it

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Posted: 13 April 2011 at 6:16am | IP Logged
Love the End bur what about Dadi and Dev Reaction?

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Posted: 13 April 2011 at 7:23am | IP Logged
part 23
lovely ending................
awesome part.........................

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Posted: 13 April 2011 at 7:34am | IP Logged
awesome ending...loved it.

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Posted: 13 April 2011 at 8:10am | IP Logged
lovely update gb.....
you write cute stories dear...
will miss this FF

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Posted: 13 April 2011 at 8:27am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Viji79

Congratulations on the successful completion. There are certain very good things abotu your FFs.
 
1. The storylines are simple
2. Easy to follow
3. Not too lengthy and hence has cohesiveness
4. Regular updates
 
Looking forward to more such FFs.
 
Thanks... I normally like to keep it simple and play with emotions....
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Posted: 13 April 2011 at 8:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by preethia

loved the update................
u always comp the ff within 20-25 parts i love that bcoz u dont try to drag the story much more than needed...............
u always keep it simple and even the mu is something that happens to ppl in normal life..........
intially i was so angry with maan to let her go and marry his bro then when things changed and he accepted his love for her and confessed i felt happy but still felt that he made a mistake and he has to repent...........
u made him repent and suffer for all the sufferings he put geet thro.......it was not a easy task for him.........but i just loved maan after he came to shimla......................from then on maan was the only element i can remember now he never gave up his love, he trusted her, he believed in his and her love............the way he was facing her anger and wrath was awesome...........yeah he did the mistake for which he had to go thro that but not many men will do that.............they wud try couple of times and they wud give up saying  if she doesnt care for me then y shud i beg.................

finally they got married and maan was right no chances to b taken with geet wat if she changes her mind..........and also geet ek jung se bhi zyada hain.........uske dimag ka koi barosa nahin..................

finally maan conquered his love.................

hey when r u going to start the new ff.............do pm me
You have very nicely summarized it......I try to put logically one block after another...that;s why you feel the story is holding you...
Thanks for loving it.....I will come up with something soon....

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