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BreakPoint (Maneet FF)- Epilogue added (pg 122) (Page 106)

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Posted: 06 April 2011 at 11:00pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by preethia

oh no no no a  big nooooooooooooooooooooo
maan cant leave her like this..............
he gave her the pain then he has to sooth it right..............
oh yaar cant wait till tom morning for the next update................
Let 's see what will happen.....

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Posted: 06 April 2011 at 11:01pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by butterfly.tanu

awesomee.............ClapClap
geet is in soo much pain...............CryCry
maan wanted to make geet happy..............
he felt if she want him to leave then he will do that..........
i know there r so many complication between them.....
but they cant be happy if they seperated..........CryCry
dont saperate maaneet.............

es..its their love story...so they will finally meet....
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Posted: 06 April 2011 at 11:03pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by drashsree100



 Clap What can I say ? Yet again am short of words Clap . So much pain , my god Cry I can't believe Geet went through so much , wandering in the streets without food , homeless , saving herself from the cruel world  & all this when she was pregnant Ouch  Cry . Poor girl , I don't blame her if she wants to hate & forget everything & everyone from the past Thumbs Up , Maan was only instrumental in bringing Aahana ; it is she who breathed life in her life that too in absence of her family Clap

Geet is not weak , in fact she's the epitome of stength , courage & dignity . Kudos to you for such brilliant sketch of her character Star  Star  Star 

Awesome part & thank you for the pm .....
I loved the pic you chose Big smile
Yes..there are two things now which Maan has to vercome...first her sufferings ..and 2nd is her insecurity...that this can happeng again to her

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Posted: 06 April 2011 at 11:04pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by hinal_maaneet

loved geet's pain n i think maan will leave as geet has told him about her pain so i think he will leave n also he will do something which is a bigger punishment than leaving geet n aahana
Not giving away on this..watch for next part
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Posted: 06 April 2011 at 11:07pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by maansee

read part 19.... awesome..............  felt geet's pain.................... but as she pure her heart........... what about maan................. his is also in pain.................... he also suffered since he met geet.............. he is also in pain.................. geet should realise this also...................... now she can't saprate father daughter............. and even she also needs maan.................. hope next part will clear each and every thing............ 

Maan is at more pain actually because it pains more to see the one you love in suffering....and when he knows its because of his wrong decision....and then he cannot share it with anyone.....
But right now...he not thinking about himself....he is just thinking about Geet...and Geet (like GHSP) is thinking about her self only......LOL
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Posted: 06 April 2011 at 11:07pm | IP Logged
@Part 19...really well expressed!!! Very well!! I seriously have no words!!ClapClapClap
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Posted: 06 April 2011 at 11:09pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by jazzerette

@Part 19...really well expressed!!! Very well!! I seriously have no words!!ClapClapClap
Thanks...I felt tooo much dialogue baazi...but could not avoid......there was no other way....i could think...

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Posted: 06 April 2011 at 11:20pm | IP Logged
felt her pain and struggle you portrayed it so well dear Clap

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