BreakPoint (Maneet FF)- Epilogue added (pg 122) - Page 7

Originally posted by: goldenball

Yes Maan knows about Dev...so let us see if he will tell her...or he will hide from her....or he will force her.....😉

hi!!!!
i ws reading ur ff-BreakPoint..
it sounds so interestng...m loving it..:)
m sndng u buddy req...plzzz do accpt it..n it wd b grt pleasure 4 me,if u add me in ur pm list!!@_@

bt as ur plot is cncrnd...i dnt thnk GB,u r going 2 let geet knw dat dev is bro of maan...!!!!isnt it??:(
it'll b heartbreakening...bt,hum aapne heart ko samjha denge k dnt worry at d end GEET GONNA B ONLY MAAN'S.....!!!:)

like geet Straight forwardness.

lovely update.........loved it!!!

awesome....

@Part 2...those lines by Maan...when he said that he is ready wait for the woman he loves all his life.......and even if she gets married, he will keep hoping to get united with her....these lines have set the stage for the future track and the theme of the story. Very well brought out. 

Superb part... loved it

nice part.....omg.....maan will b fixing geet with dev himself......wat will happen now...????continue soon..........

Originally posted by: zahra15

nice part.....omg.....maan will b fixing geet with dev himself......wat will happen now...????continue soon..........

yes.. they will get married with Maan's blessings....😆😆

Originally posted by: debomaaneet

hi!!!!
i ws reading ur ff-BreakPoint..
it sounds so interestng...m loving it..:)
m sndng u buddy req...plzzz do accpt it..n it wd b grt pleasure 4 me,if u add me in ur pm list!!@_@

Thanks dear.. for loving it. I am not sure if you have read Sandstorm...do so if not yet....(i try to sell SandStorm to everyone...😆 )