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AR FF Yaare Dil Daare updated PART 37 ON PAGE 115 [11/02/2015] (Page 43)

Shafy_Kaira_MN IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 7:13am | IP Logged

just wanna share my view that in your this ff.. you had shown various twist in the lovestory of ar and sajan but my.. dear... friend.. our.. mayur.. lovestory.. is as simple.. as could be possible...

means in serial also..
they have.. some.. sort.. of hatke.. lovestory...talking.. the way you have potray.. their character in your this ff.. i completely..understand...their.. behaviour..
but yaar..it feels..verybad...a lovestory...with no..twist...that too.of our mayur's lovestory...ConfusedConfusedConfused
difficult to imagine...
itni.. aasani se confession... ho gaya..
seems..
 
very boring...infact.. i must se,, sajan's lovestory.. is.. somewhat..mixed of spices...
please yaar...please.. bring..some..twist..in our.. mayur's lovestory..
i know.. you must be thinking that i am out of my mind..but please..do..rethink about it...
i just wanna..that...they..didn't..realise..the...pain..of seperation...when two..lovebirds..get seperated..not..even...they fight...
 
hard..to..digest..mayur..with... no fight...OuchOuchOuch
agar..itne..sweet homge..to...hummme..diabties..ho..jayegi...
please...do...take..notice..about..it...
give..them also..chance.. to prove.. their true love...they also.. get some...opportunity...
to give.. their.. love a chance...
also..provide..some...twists..to their..lofe..also...how...many..times..they.will..solve..others...
problem...
and yes...
you also...haven't provided...mayur...raindanceEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
and yes.. how.. could.. i forget..
just wanna.. mention... one more think that...
mayur..are just too.. dump..really..very very.. dump...in the name.. of romance...really...oppposite..of mjht...
please show..some...passion...yaar..show..some..intimacy...some...
egarness...to feel...some..sensuous...something... that...made...
both.. of them.. crazy.. for each other...
 
please..i request you to.. give a thought.. about it...


Edited by shafyyy - 01 June 2011 at 7:22am

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Posted: 02 June 2011 at 12:08pm | IP Logged
OMGGG...!!!!!
Wat the hell was this?!
Gunjan getting married to rannvijay...?!
That's Impossible...
plzzz dont do this to my SaJan simi...plzzz...
MayUr r happy & evn AR r happy...
then y SaJan????
plzzz i cant see anyone else with Gunjan...plzzz...
plzzz reunite SaJan dear plzzz...
thier love-story can nver have a Sad-Ending...plzzz dont do this plzzz...
do cont soon & reunite SaJan...
thnx 4 the PM...

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Posted: 03 June 2011 at 11:21am | IP Logged
nice part simi...i hate ranvijay...gunjan to dikhawe ka khush ho rahi hai,i understood it...samrat keun nahi samjha?
punam

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Posted: 03 June 2011 at 11:33am | IP Logged
awww   dont end sam gungun story like that  plxxx
cont soon

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Posted: 04 June 2011 at 6:38am | IP Logged
nice part
continue soon
thanks for PM.

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Posted: 07 June 2011 at 7:35am | IP Logged
UPDATEEE SOONNN

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Posted: 11 June 2011 at 11:57pm | IP Logged
please update

please update

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Posted: 13 June 2011 at 4:34am | IP Logged
waiting for your update...

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