AR FF Yaare Dil Daare updated PART 37 ON PAGE 115 [11/02/2015] - Page 33

This content was originally posted by-shafyyy

just wanna share my view that in your this ff.. you had shown various twist in the lovestory of ar and sajan but my.. dear... friend.. our.. mayur.. lovestory.. is as simple.. as could be possible...

means in serial also..

they have.. some.. sort.. of hatke.. lovestory...talking.. the way you have potray.. their character in your this ff.. i completely..understand...their.. behaviour..

but yaar..it feels..verybad...a lovestory...with no..twist...that too.of our mayur's lovestory...😕😕😕

difficult to imagine...

itni.. aasani se confession... ho gaya..

seems..

 

very boring...infact.. i must se,, sajan's lovestory.. is.. somewhat..mixed of spices...

please yaar...please.. bring..some..twist..in our.. mayur's lovestory..

i know.. you must be thinking that i am out of my mind..but please..do..rethink about it...

i just wanna..that...they..didn't..realise..the...pain..of seperation...when two..lovebirds..get seperated..not..even...they fight...

 

hard..to..digest..mayur..with... no fight...

agar..itne..sweet homge..to...hummme..diabties..ho..jayegi...

please...do...take..notice..about..it...

give..them also..chance.. to prove.. their true love...they also.. get some...opportunity...

to give.. their.. love a chance...

also..provide..some...twists..to their..lofe..also...how...many..times..they.will..solve..others...

problem...

and yes...

you also...haven't provided...mayur...raindance😳😳😳

and yes.. how.. could.. i forget..

just wanna.. mention... one more think that...

mayur..are just too.. dump..really..very very.. dump...in the name.. of romance...really...oppposite..of mjht...

please show..some...passion...yaar..show..some..intimacy...some...

egarness...to feel...some..sensuous...something... that...made...

both.. of them.. crazy.. for each other...

 

please..i request you to.. give a thought.. about it...

ok dear..bt plz updt a big one with loads of sajan parts..