Posted: 16 March 2011 at 1:23am | IP Logged
well m silent reader of the forum. But today i thought to share some of my suggestions regarding the story. I would like to know how many of you agree with me.
well at first instead of all this kitchen conspiracy there must have been some climax in the story. Go-ahem are not getting together, I agree with it upto certain extent. But instead of making a simple casual patch up between them and ending the story lines the CV's must do some relevant changes which i think seems more reasonable. Since the story has alot of potential, so instead of dropping the TRP(I hope it wont never happen coz its my favorite show) they do some changes / addition in story so as to create some climax. I have some suggestions which I think can add in some more spice in the story listed below:1. Change in Gopi's life style:
at first they must do some changes in Gopi so as to make her a real match for the lead hero. The first i would suggest is to do some arrangements to get her properly educated. As she has been shown illiterated & uneducated so they at first provide her with some plat-form so that she can complete her studies besides being a house wife & her mother-in-law (kokila) must support her. OR She should better leave modi house as she once did before Nani's arrival. & instead of going to Urmi's house she must find herself some accommodation like girl's hostel or ashram, find herself a job + complete her education. THEN she must be shown becoming a strong woman, who is well educated, cunning, clever, sharp, smart, successful & a down -to- earth woman of substance. She must have been shown a well educated working woman (for example; a school teacher, a business woman, a newly emerged fashion designer or a newly stepped in event manager/party planner etc).
ON THE OTHER HAND; it will be a good twist if Ahem find out from his colleagues or other channels that a new lady stepped into business world in Rajkot & she is the market striker. After some investigation Ahem find out that this successful lady in Rajkot is none else but his "JAHIL, GAWAR, MORKH" wife Gopi & he s completely SHOCKED.
Also Gopi's make over n hair style should have some modern n stunning looks (Like real Gia manek); like Rashi has in serial. Rashi looks modern as compared to Gopi.2. Gopi-Ahem Relationship:
Next it would be gopi's turn. The way Ahem treated her like useless piece of trash, she must pay him back, in the same way i-e; keeping herself fully absorbed in house hold activities and her professional life as well. She must teach Ahem a lesson and let him realize that she isn't a bloody waste and has some self respect. Ahem must learn that he was always wrong & IFFF he would have trusted his wife then she d definitely become a perfect match for him.
Finally after some time, some usual (tu-tu, mei-mei); a BIG TWIST should make them come closer and make their patch upp & their love story must be started in extreme romantic way.3. Change in Rashi & Urmi:-
Both mom & daughter should realize their mistakes and confess that they do this for money because like other people they also had some dreams but poor financial conditions never let their dreams come true & Urmi must confess that this was the reason she "by hook or by crook" let her daughter get into Modi house because she never wanted her daughter to live in a misery she was living in. This way both of them must appologise for all their mistakes from Modi family & at that time Kokila should be shown a most kind and generous lady, she should forgive them. Both Rashi & Urmi must change into positive characters and Rashi-Gopi, Rashi-Kokila, Urmi-Gopi & Urmi-kokila patch up and friendly terms must be shown. Finally Rashi & Jigger love story must be shown.4. Change in Dhawal's lifestyle:-
Like gopi; Dhawal must also be shown a well educated, sober & decent & offcourse a hottie guy (like in real Ashish Sharma is ). He must start a good successful business, change their financial conditions, get a new house & usual luxuries so that both Kenjal & Urmila become comfortable & their problems are solved. Finally some incidents let both Kenjal & Dhawal become closer (their love story must be started). Also Kenjal & Koki relationship conflicts must be shown solved in a positive way.5. 2 families full patch up & a new story onwards:-
Once two families should have a complete patch up, a new twist should add to the story line for example some new entry in the serial (extrem evil & negative) and both the 2 families should fight the evil together. This sounds cool..
So these are all what i think should be added & i believe it will become real yumm. I hope u all like it But guys please don't mind if u dont like any of the above things. Appologies in advance.
Lots of love for everyone,
~~ Sara ~~