Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee


Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

SS/OS Oh Girl ..Uff Teri Ada(Maan n Geet) updt Pg2

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 2:32pm | IP Logged
Short Story /One shot ...basically will wrap it up in 2 or 3 parts at the most ....obviously if there is acceptance of the story ....I really dont write fun stuffLOL..cause I am no gud with it but here is an attempt .......saw a couple ...and it gave me this idea so let me know what u think

Part 1

Teri Adaye Kuch Aaisa Aasar Kar Jati Hai
Paar Is Dil K Ek Teer Sa Kar Jati Hai


"Hmmm I am listening 'go on " Geet said munching on the fries ..and sipping her coke



Tumhein to jab milao khaati hi rehti ho 'Geet ka pehla aur aakhri pyaar 'khaana '." Said Maan


Oye u want me to hang up '.apni problem leke roz chale aate ho and I try to solve them aur upar se mujhe hi suna rahe ho '.said geet


Haan Haan hang up khaane ke saamne meri to koi value nahin hai '..said Maan


Ok then '.geet said only to be interrupted


Oye '.hellou cant hang up '.pehle mujhe koi rasta to batao '.and ya u r free to eat aur juch chahiye to who bhi le aao and then talk 'said Maan


Ab aaya na line pe 'chal bol .said Geet



Hmmm Yaar That Sam '.Dadi wants me to settle down with her par '''he stopped


Par Kya '..Dekhne mein acchi nahin hai '..? she asked


Nahin ''She is pretty pretty'.he said


Hmmm not bad to phir Is she fat 'moti hai kya meri tarah 'Geet asked


Nahin 'she is quite well figured ..almost like those sexy models '.and waise tu moti hai ya nahin wo to tabhi pataa chalega jab I meet u and give my verdict..So kab mil rahen hain hum?...Maan said


Mujhe tere verdict ki zaroorat nahin hai '.i have eyes and can see very well '.she cont


That doesn't answer my question 'he said


Kya '.she asked


Ki Hum kab Mil rahe hain ?...he said


Ab yeh Sam se shaadi ke beech mein humare mil ne ki baat kahan se aagayi ''she said


Arre yaar u know me for the last 6 months 'first online chatting then phone 'par hum abhi tak mile kyun nahin 'atleast now u can trust me '.he said


Yahaan Baat Sam ki ho rahi thi ''she said



To ab baaki baat Sam ki tab hogi when we meet for Lunch tom ''so I'll pick u up tom 12.30 pm '..he said


Haan Haan aaja phir 'dekhte hain lunch pe le jaata hai ki nahin '..she said

If I don't take u are u gonna leave me 'aakhir khaane ka sawaal hai 'isse pehle u change yr mind bye n cya '''..he said with a smile playing on his lips



Ok bye ''dekhte hain '.kaun kya karta hai ''''she said as she disconnected the phone


They had been chatting and talking for half a year now and she knew the minutest detail abt him and his family '..and tom she wud know the only thing unknown abt him ''


From just a virtual acquaintance when she graduated to being his best buddy ,philosopher cum guide 'he didn't know but he knew everything abt her '..yes everything 'and tom he was gonna meet her finally and decide whether her first love had, had  those damaging effects  as she mentioned every now and then as a warning '''''''





Kaunsa pehnoo '..she said to herself as she put one dress after another  in front and looked at herself in the mirror '..


Yeh mirror except for making me realize how large my size is kuch aur bhi bataa sakta hai ''she was clearly getting irritated


Ma '..she yelled


Ma help me batao kaunsa accha lagega 'this one or that one '..she said pointingto the pink kurti n white long skirt '..and then shifting her finger to the white anarkali suit '..


I think the skirt n the kurti 'pink looks gud on u '..her mum said as she left the room





Come beta 'make yrself comfortable 'main Geet ko abhi bulati hoon '.Mrs Handa ushered Maan in


Geet 'beta''..kahan ho '.. Maan is here '.Mrs Handa said as she directed the servant to serve Maan some cold drink


Haan Haan 'aa rahi hoon '.itna time bhi nahin uske paas to why is he here 'waise bhi abhi mujhe dekhega to sab time barabar ho jaega'..she yelled back


Maan was like she is something isn't she ''..but he was feeling  quite excited to see her for the first time , he felt a bit nervous n all 'oh why was she taking so long''



Hi ''she said


Hi '..he said after a pause as he cont to stare at her

Haan ..Haan ghoor lo '.koi farak nahin padhega 'I look like a bora/sack I know ''she said


Tumhein apni opinion doosron pe force karne ka bahut shauk hai '.let me form my own opinion '..he said


Abhi to maine tumhein poori tarah se dekha bhi nahin '..he said as walked up to her and started to check her out



Jitna dekha wo kaafi nahin 'so Lunch cancel 'mil gayi khushi mujhse milke ''ab jao 'she said


Tum ghar aaye guests ko aise treat karti ho ?Matlab u don't ask them to sit and have a drink or something 'he asked


Tum mehmaan nahin friend ho '.ek batameez dost 'she said as she gestured to him to have a seat


Ummmm I shall not take a seat 'he said


Tumhe apni so called problem ka sol chahiye  'ki nahin ''she said


Again apna lecture chalu 'ab chalo 'isse pehle lunch time over ho jaaye ''he said


Aur fir tum khao gi bhi kitna 'yaar jaldi karo time nahin hai 'he cont with a slight smile on his lips


She picked up the cushion from the sofa and threw it at him '


If u throw out this anger u have inside na 'tumhara size bhi aadha reh jaega 'kitna gussa'he was laufing now '.waise yeh kya kya khaake aapne yeh mukaam paaya hai ..his lauf was getting beyond his control


She threw another cushion at him and he ducked ''tum bahut batameez ho 'she said


Accha ab chalo 'and I am really glad that we have finally met '..he said '.pulling her by her hand




Ab batao Sam se kya problem hai 'Geet continued while enjoying her chicken biryani


Problem to nahin hai but yaar she seems quite self centred '.and possessive kinds''u know tum kahan jaa rahe ho 'kisse mil rahe ho '..types 'he said


Aree to girlfriend hai to possessive to hogi ..its natural yaar '.u shud feel honored usne tumhein choose kiya hai ''tumhein ek achi stylish ladki mil rahi '.isse better tumhein nahin milne wali 'so watch it'.she said


Oh really mil jayegi bahut mil jayengi ''..bahut padhi hain'he said


Kahan padhi hain backyard mein ? she said


Very  Funny ''.Matlab Girlfriend hai to she cant be understanding'kabhi meri problem to samajh ti nahin and upar se Dadi   ''he said


Understanding 'woh  friends hote hain Gfriends  to nahin hoti 'haan biwi ban jaaye to shaayad '.she said


Really ..tum miss no it all ho '..To phir main apni dost ko hi apni Gfriend banakar use shaadi kar loonga  'he said


Bacchu shaadi ke baad no dost no girlfriend 'only biwi remains ''.she said


U sound experienced 'he said


Experienced kuch nahin mere senses intact hain  aur tumhare Sam aur pata nahin kitni ladkiyon ke peeche padh padh kar kharab ho gaye hain 'she said


Kitni ladkiyan ... 'yeh Sam bhi Dadi ki meherbaani hai '..pls I am neither desperate nor interested..he said


Waise mujhe tumhara problem he nahin samajh aa rahaa ''so whats there to solve 'matlab tum use chahte bhi ho 'nahin bhi 'I think give it some time n thought 'and get me some dessert now '.she said


Yess boss'''''he said as he gestured to the waiter to come and take their order .

To be Cont .....if u guys want it Embarrassed

Edited by rdfan - 16 March 2011 at 5:40pm

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pickachu IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 3:42pm | IP Logged
Veryyy nice.
Continue soonnnn.

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 3:59pm | IP Logged
Very Nice..
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Cont soon Xx.,,
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nice ... plzz continue and add me to the pm list

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lovley update .............
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this is awesome...definitely plzzz cont soon

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Nice one Poo Hug. Do continue Embarrassed

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