Fan Fictions

India-Forums

   
Fan Fictions
Fan Fictions

FF-Paradox- MAAN & GEET- THREAD 6 (Page 54)

Azmii Goldie
Azmii
Azmii

Joined: 29 December 2010
Posts: 1268

Posted: 24 March 2011 at 2:37pm | IP Logged
hope u feel good now
hun
the update was awesome, loved it
cont soon hun

divareena IF-Sizzlerz
divareena
divareena

Joined: 16 February 2006
Posts: 16799

Posted: 24 March 2011 at 2:42pm | IP Logged

Part 53/54/55

 

So glad that maan won and knew he would. I love geet's faith in him.

 

Loved geet's anger at everyone not allowing her and maan to meet before the wedding. Do love how maan comes and consoles her.  So nice of maan wanting geet to finish her studies.

 

How could sam say that she saw geet with dev. Good that she is going away.

siroilily Goldie
siroilily
siroilily

Joined: 21 November 2010
Posts: 1220

Posted: 25 March 2011 at 12:39am | IP Logged
great update.............waiting for moreEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
RageOfAnAngel IF-Sizzlerz
RageOfAnAngel
RageOfAnAngel

Joined: 04 March 2011
Posts: 9713

Posted: 25 March 2011 at 12:47am | IP Logged

Finally I completed reading parts 51 - 55 . Really this one is awesome . Thumbs Up

Even though Sam claims she 's innocent , I don't know why I have a nagging feeling she's jealous of Geet somewhere Ermm

Neways loved all the parts Heart

Get well soon dear ... Hug   Hug
ixiaa Senior Member
ixiaa
ixiaa

Joined: 12 December 2010
Posts: 629

Posted: 25 March 2011 at 1:43am | IP Logged

Great update.

Plz update only after u get well.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Take care n get well soon
18mypride IF-Rockerz
18mypride
18mypride

Joined: 12 October 2010
Posts: 9207

Posted: 25 March 2011 at 4:35am | IP Logged
lovely .... very keen to know further... Smile
worried about shila and shoriya...

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

FireSafireFiree

FireSafireFiree IF-Sizzlerz
FireSafireFiree
FireSafireFiree

Joined: 28 October 2007
Posts: 10625

Posted: 25 March 2011 at 10:23am | IP Logged
still have cooments to read... will update soon... xxxx
xxx

The following 10 member(s) liked the above post:

maaneetfan123khansangelRocks.Dhara18mypridesanu3108chsweety22swetha10KaSh-Maneet-FanRageOfAnAngel_BlackPearl_

FireSafireFiree IF-Sizzlerz
FireSafireFiree
FireSafireFiree

Joined: 28 October 2007
Posts: 10625

Posted: 25 March 2011 at 10:29am | IP Logged

***PARADOX***
part 56
pls do comment & press the like button' ty for all the love and suport
xxx
sorry for mistakes
xx



The time seems to be perfect. As I suspected. Everything looked calm & lovely. Everything was beyond my imagination. I was shocked along with surprised. She walked down like a fairy. My fairy. My princes. I could barely remove my eyes from her. Why should I? My world was making her way to me. My life. I could see from far distance girls were giggling. Laughing. Trying there best to tease me! I didn't care! What to care? I thought. It's my would be wife after all. I could clearly see my hungry eyes were making her nervous. My jaan was nervous. Very nervous. I tried to remove my gaze to ease her! But I failed. Badly. My eye only came back to her. & her only. I sighed. There was no option. I just couldn't remove my gaze. Not at all.
She came in front of me. Amused with my greedy eyes. I wasn't sure at all how she expects me to wait this long? I can't! I rather merry her today! There was new urge in my body. Taking over to feel her. To drink her. I wanted to taste every part.... I still could feel the first day! The day I tasted her skin. The flavor was still there. It was just getting hungry & Hungrier with each passing second....
Geet jerks her eyes to the ring! Everyone laughs as maans eyes was visible to everyone.
Shila: "bhi only few days!"
Maan gives her a glare!
Ani: "bro... Don't forget us after married as you will be joru ka gulum!" one by one all his cousin teased. Leaving maan & Geet with a red face of embarrassment... ...
The ring ceremony Began....

The whole atmosphere was calm... Happy. Exiting. Nerving.
Maan quickly snatches her way out of the crowds...
Geet: "what are you doing?" Geet looks round. Trying her vest not get embarrassed. Today was enough.
Maan: "you looking really sexy!" he hugs her from the back.
Geet: "ok! Ab choro! You will only make us more....
Maan didn't let go... He pushed her in one of the nearest bedroom. & locked the door... Her aroma barely let him way. He just wanted to feel her. Kiss her. Love her. He have been controlling for past 10 years! 10 years! This is too much...
Geet: "you are sick! You are complaining about you controlling over past 10tears!" maan snaps out!
Maan: "was I that loud!" Geet makes a baby face... "Ab control nahi hota!" he smirks as both lands on the bed... Geet slowly snakes her hand round his neck as they slowly started to kiss. It felt like heaven. A kiss after almost a week. Stupid ritual. Maan Whispers.... Geet giggles... Bringing him in to his embrace.... Maan invades her mouth with his tongue. It tasted like heaven. He couldn't control as he fixes his face from one side to another. Exploring her. Reading her mouth with his tongue. Sucking everything out. She gasped for air... But the pleasure was too much. There was no time for the air...

Downstairs...

Handa & khuranas family came to gather once again to announce another good news to the media....

Mr khurana- I am happy to announce another engagement of Brij & shila..... Every one was shocked... Then clapping. Shila turns round. Dropping her drink instantly. few of her friends took her to the stage while Brij made his way. shila was under shock! Very shock.... As the press took there picture getting engaged. Se wanted to protest every second but no one gave her any time or space. She nearly wa in tears. Soon as everything finished she ran to her room. Trying her best to call Shoria. Her luck... It wasn't going through.... shila couldn't stop crying! 2 Moros headline will be her Brij & Geet maans engagement picture! She became more worried about that thought... & ran down instantly.... To stop this nonsense.. But Brij cought her. Brought her in his embrace! She was shocked & scared! Se never have seen him in that way. Never! Never even thought even in her dream! That this will happen!
Brij: "I knew you love me!... I knew you will never say no!" he kisses her cheek. Shila was taken back. Press was taking picture. She left shaken. No word coming out of her mouth. No words leaving her mouth...
Shila: "no! We no!" she tried to protest but the reporter Surrounded them instantly. Asking millions of question....

In someones bedroom-

Panting... Both stopped. Looking at one another.
Geet: "Ayr Kuch mat Karo! I will lose it!" she closes her eyes. Bringing him more close. There was no gap... But still she couldn't help her self to bring him close....
Maan: "if you don't leave me! How could I possibly leave!" he smirks... Pressing his hardening over the cloths. Desperately wanted to feel her. She smiled... Then in one jerk both stands up.... But again lands on top of one another.
Geet: "Choro na! Chalo!" maan smiles naughtily.....
Before going out. They fixes them self then walks out.

Press was all round shila & Brij... They could barely talk.

Geet- what's going on there?
Maan- I don't know!
Geet- hmm... Why crowd round Brij & shila?
Maan- nothing serious probably!
Geet- no! Let's ask.... Before they could go ahed to talk Avantika finds them.
Avantika- here you are! I have been looking for you two for ages. Hurry come with me!
Maan: mom! Calm down! Why?
Avantika: marriage. There will be double marriage on your day! & it's only two days way!
Geet: what? M...marriage only two days way? We only became en... Maan distracts...
Maan: perfect! But what do you mean by double marriage?
Avantika: Shila & Brij!

Geet stopped there instantly. Frozen. Maan barely could add up! Only he knows that Brij haven't changed at all! He can't risk his sister life with him!
Geet & maan: no!
Geet: no... No! Mum! How cold... I mean shila have agreed?... Avantika looks at them. But surprised. Aren't they suppose to be happy?
Avantika- they are already engaged!
Geet- what? She looks back at the crowd & starts to walk towards them. Flowed by maan. Avantika confused.
Maan takes Brij in a room....

Maan- what is this? I never knew you had interest in my sister? & I can't let this happen. Specially knowing you are not one girls man!
Brij- I know what you are thinking about me! But I have changed. I love shila!
Maan- you don't even know her! How could you possibly suggest this!
Brij- how do you know? I love her & that's true!
Maan- no! This is wrong! Are you crazy! Have you realized what sam will go through! She still haven't recovered! & you thinking about meraying?
Brij- I never loved her! It's not like I have told her to sleep with me! He spits the words! She decided to! She knew everything about me!
Maan- & I know everything about you! I could possibly let my sister destroy er life!
Brij- she loves me!

Maan was about to walk out in anger. But stops on the spot! He have completely forgot about the talk between her & Geet about Shoria.



i will update another part later on 2day...
:)
xxxxxxxx



Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 25 March 2011 at 10:38am

The following 188 member(s) liked the above post:

ssssmarangel_subsnehag10nams4psruthilaila889gaberinlwgeetshanky18scarce05amiainastar432Candy_jsAISHAJSdeekshacgAym7thea_angelyridhisidhimaaneet28gagsykasturi11zazoy12krishna.asmi123fizza25saadi88hemvbkirannaryaninazsijcyberprincessmaan13579guru-ki-dewaaninamitasinPaloma_DYellowtullipsmaaneetfan123varshakhedekardrashtipatel30bhakbhartifanalu5123avantika_singhneetiporwalMaansMishtimaaneet93blessednimjuhi_ansarichoudhary.awifeyTinkJiamans22day2008lakshmisalvadibdasOpaldews-BeingAppy-maureen84cue1ixiaaperfectflirt8Kashish9687rostsumusumuMoon002kkaavvyyaakhansangelzoha25SOLACEofEYESkavya.sravya-eiya-imaasthaHADmishtiNazmaaHawtieSeepSrabon_DharasiroililySwaatiiavani_9CrystalSayaanshimanshisrikrithicharlie1950lodydreamy4everQueenbeePallavireea88doosheekaAnu_RyadanuZooniBegamsanjuleeRukhluvMaanm-g19mansijani21star_777Hina.khanxxxcrazydevil87Lakshmi86Be.edgyam_sweet_pariRohini20dimpzzmaansi007butterfly.tanuBharathi_gurticyum321muskaan_cute19-shamima-maanujaanuRocks.DharagangesegbsheetalvasauntamedtigressninaviJayaR9staroneserialsputhCutee999PaintedSkyHanoAhmedbd670816kiran99sparikhIqbal Neha1Maaneet4eveShimmerrprincess163MsMovielover--ANGEL--anmirzanats0101d_soniajeyanthi123kshubhangivasavi_srisimi91ritzy09Ramharikiran_rati-Zahra15-smallvillepunjabi.princesalicia212ajennsweet cherryanjucool18myprideKrishnaluv94-Veritaserum-Dilsayluv_DDkrati5blueopalsanu3108mrk-1VintagepeachrsroopalimuskanpShalvekawaii_geet6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6Sabmeratu.zaara2212preethiachsweety22-afsha-CrazzyBusysweet scorpiomitzi11mchopramaaniqra..hinal..KaSh-Maneet-FanHansaNjanu_2006anuandaviSahSahswetha10preethiCraziest_MGTyroimpoojavermaRageOfAnAngelMadhuri53_BlackPearl_DownhillSecretKhabri420khwaishfanspvd

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post
KABHI MASTI KABHI PYAAR(second thread)

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 85 86

Author: hazra66   Replies: 683   Views: 78279

hazra66 683 78279 07 April 2013 at 10:02pm by ..sweetchilly..
DOSTI AUR PYAAR(second thread)

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 87 88

Author: hazra66   Replies: 697   Views: 62532

hazra66 697 62532 26 July 2012 at 2:44pm by sky86
Taming the wild- AR story NEW THREAD pg-152

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 149 150

Author: mansibharti   Replies: 1198   Views: 251549

mansibharti 1198 251549 05 November 2011 at 4:06am by amyzbasket
FF-Maan's confession&Geet's revelation-53last part

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 141 142

Author: dewdropred   Replies: 1131   Views: 274221

dewdropred 1131 274221 30 September 2011 at 9:23pm by -serenity-
Do I have to say the words (AR) #2 - Note pg 147

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 143 144

Author: richa_b   Replies: 1147   Views: 96258

richa_b 1147 96258 29 March 2011 at 4:36am by rupzloveu

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels
Forums

Fan Fictions Topic Index

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index