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-kashish-maaneet ff THREAD 3 epilogue pg129 11ARL (Page 96)

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Posted: 08 April 2011 at 12:55am | IP Logged
Considering the kind of play boy Maan is in this FF, i agree to the fact that it will take time for him to realise his "LOVE" persay.
 
Still i am unable to digets the fact that he let another woman enter his room and use the bed that he shared with Geet. It stays in my throat, i am not able to swallow it. Him being aroused or what ever, I feel the slaps she gave him is just not enough. Ouch
 
End of day, I want only Maneet. Any other man or woman is fine to bring in the jealousy element. But once they are commited to each other i just cant stand another person between them. It leaves a bad taste in the mouth. I love your TM Deewangi Pyar ka ehsaas and almost all your FFs more than anything mainly because you put the thrid person right in their place. They never come between Maneet..
 
Loved the way you handled the situation between meera and maan. And the reaction from Maneet was just awesome Muski. Maan being so angry on self and not having a proper answer to Geet... And Geet being the perfect wife.... *sighs* what to say! Please update soon....

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Posted: 08 April 2011 at 12:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by princess163

Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

Originally posted by princess163

hum dono anjaan the, ek doosre se bekhabar,
phir kaise achaanak kismat ne jod diya hamen iss kadar....
aapne-apne sapnon ke peeche bhaagte hue,
shaadi ke pavitra rishte se me jude.....
 
zindagi chalti rahi, hum door-door rahe,
par kismat ke haathon hamesha majboor rahe.....
jab ham mile toh kaisi thi woh kashish,
ek baar ki mulaaqaat bani baar-baar milne ki khwahish....
 
ek doosre se bhaagte rahe, par uss ehsaas se kaise bhaage?
jo hamaare dilon ko jodne lagi, uss dor se kaise bhaage.....
jo pyaar panapne lagaa tha dil mein, uss pyaar se kaise bhaage,
jo kashish basi thi zehen me, uss ehsaas se kaise bhaage.....
 
tumne muh mod liya,  mera dil chalni kiya,
maaana koi wada kabhi hamne nahin kiya....
par woh ankahi baaten, woh mulaquaten,
kya woh kisi waade se kam thi??
 
maine apne dil se ladna chod diya,
maan liya ki dil tumhe de diya...
par kya tum bhi kabhi ye maan paaoge?
dil de chuke ho mujhe, kabhi yeh jaan paaoge?
 
jab socha ki alag ho gayen hain raaste...
toh kismat ne phir bana diya hamsafar.....
jab socha ki shayad dil door ho paye tumse,
toh khuda ne tumhe mere paas bhej diya!
 
muh se chaahe kitna hi mana kar lo,
pehle apne jasbaat to kaboo me kar lo...
dekh sakti hun, pyaar hai tumhe bhi mujhse,
phir bhi kinara kar rahi hoon tumse...
 
chaaha ki door chali jaun tumse..
phir kyun nai dekh payi kisis ke saath tumhe?
kyun aaye tum mere peeche, kyun diya pyaar ka woh dard mujhe?
haan, aaj maan liya tumne mohabbat hai tumhe bhi,
dekhna hai kismat kahan le jaati hai ab hamen....
 
okay, so it seems u have completely driven me insane muski di!!!
I HAVE NEVER EVER WRITTEN ANYTHING OF THIS SORT, NEVER IN HINDI...
i mean subah TM and ab yeh...OMG!
I have lost itLOL
but, loved the updateBig smile
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it's beautiful awesome, brilliant.Clap
perfect emotions.
 loved it.

 
Thanks a lot diBig smileEmbarrassedHug
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Posted: 08 April 2011 at 1:00am | IP Logged

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Posted: 08 April 2011 at 1:08am | IP Logged
OMG did you guys see maan is going to dance in upcoming episode in GHSP as sardar jiLOLWinkLOL
 
can't wait to seeWinkStar

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Posted: 08 April 2011 at 1:16am | IP Logged
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Posted: 08 April 2011 at 1:21am | IP Logged

soooooooooon

make it sooon



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your's
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