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Posted: 08 April 2011 at 7:03am | IP Logged
Originally posted by princess163

The update was lovely...the confession was superb...but i am still very sad and you know why!!

I can't call it an abrupt ending coz u can't ever do anything abrupt with your updates...but yeah, it was SUDDEN....n very unexpected....kyon muski di??
Why did you end it so soon?
You warned us about the impending end of Deewangi and Khamoshi...but, this N TM were supposed to continue na??
TM ke bina toh i can't even think about my day now!Cry Please don't end that at least anytime soon!
 
Since the time the first of the ffs that I was reading while it was in progress ended, i had started this thing of writing a poem sort of thing especially after the last update.....
 wanted to post something for kashish too!
But, I think I won't be able to do justice after what I posted after the last update...coz that is the best I have written till now and the only one in Hindi That I have ever written n probably will ever write!!!
SO, I AM SORRY FOR REPEATING, BUT I AM REPOSTING THE SAME POEM/THOUGHTS...HERE AGAIN....A TRIBUTE TO KASHISH FROM ME---
 
hum dono anjaan the, ek doosre se bekhabar,
phir kaise achaanak kismat ne jod diya hamen iss kadar....
aapne-apne sapnon ke peeche bhaagte hue,
shaadi ke pavitra rishte se me jude.....
 
zindagi chalti rahi, hum door-door rahe,
par kismat ke haathon hamesha majboor rahe.....
jab ham mile toh kaisi thi woh kashish,
ek baar ki mulaaqaat bani baar-baar milne ki khwahish....
 
ek doosre se bhaagte rahe, par uss ehsaas se kaise bhaage?
jo hamaare dilon ko jodne lagi, uss dor se kaise bhaage.....
jo pyaar panapne lagaa tha dil mein, uss pyaar se kaise bhaage,
jo kashish basi thi zehen me, uss ehsaas se kaise bhaage.....
 
tumne muh mod liya,  mera dil chalni kiya,
maaana koi wada kabhi hamne nahin kiya....
par woh ankahi baaten, woh mulaquaten,
kya woh kisi waade se kam thi??
 
maine apne dil se ladna chod diya,
maan liya ki dil tumhe de diya...
par kya tum bhi kabhi ye maan paaoge?
dil de chuke ho mujhe, kabhi yeh jaan paaoge?
 
jab socha ki alag ho gayen hain raaste...
toh kismat ne phir bana diya hamsafar.....
jab socha ki shayad dil door ho paye tumse,
toh khuda ne tumhe mere paas bhej diya!
 
muh se chaahe kitna hi mana kar lo,
pehle apne jasbaat to kaboo me kar lo...
dekh sakti hun, pyaar hai tumhe bhi mujhse,
phir bhi kinara kar rahi hoon tumse...
 
chaaha ki door chali jaun tumse..
phir kyun nai dekh payi kisis ke saath tumhe?
kyun aaye tum mere peeche, kyun diya pyaar ka woh dard mujhe?
haan, aaj maan liya tumne mohabbat hai tumhe bhi,
dekhna hai kismat kahan le jaati hai ab hamen....
 
Swati


beautiful poem swati,
well described it.

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Posted: 08 April 2011 at 7:07am | IP Logged
SmileGood ending.
      cant beleive it has endedCry

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Posted: 08 April 2011 at 7:08am | IP Logged
Ohhh why did you end it so abruptly? :-(

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Posted: 08 April 2011 at 7:12am | IP Logged
great
superb

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Posted: 08 April 2011 at 7:14am | IP Logged
ShockedOuch

omgShocked can't believe kashish ended.............so soon.....ShockedShocked

THEY LIVED HAPPILY EVER AFTER PYAR KI KASHISH
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Edited by siroilily - 08 April 2011 at 7:15am

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Posted: 08 April 2011 at 7:22am | IP Logged
so sad it ended but it was a good ff after all it was you that was writing it. hope you come up with more great ffs. congrats for a great ff. loved all the way

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Posted: 08 April 2011 at 7:29am | IP Logged
OMFG!! what belle end!! Really amazing end loved Maan's emotions!!

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Posted: 08 April 2011 at 7:30am | IP Logged
i love it......bt its already ending........i hope u cme bck with another gr8 ff of urs...............

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