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Posted: 13 years ago
😔 Aisa kyun kia muskan.is ko end kyun kar di.i loved it too much.aur kuch din to khich hi sakti thena aap...........nywy wonderful story.i loved these maan nd geet.ur FF main aap hameshai ladkio ko strong dikhaya wo jaisei environment me pali baRI hogi.ohh is ka matlab ye nehi hai k ladko strong nehi hain ur FF me.i love every MAAN in every FF in GF!!!!!! kya karu geet serial ki maan kaise na jani kya kar dala mujhe ab maan nampei pyar hain. Edited by paponecon - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
U ended it so fast :( anywayz love the updated... Hope u can give us an epilogue
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow.. the way he confessed his love was good...
 
thanks for such a beautiful story...
 
when are u starting a new one
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Posted: 13 years ago

The update was lovely...the confession was superb...but i am still very sad and you know why!!

I can't call it an abrupt ending coz u can't ever do anything abrupt with your updates...but yeah, it was SUDDEN....n very unexpected....kyon muski di??
Why did you end it so soon?
You warned us about the impending end of Deewangi and Khamoshi...but, this N TM were supposed to continue na??
TM ke bina toh i can't even think about my day now!😭 Please don't end that at least anytime soon!
 
Since the time the first of the ffs that I was reading while it was in progress ended, i had started this thing of writing a poem sort of thing especially after the last update.....
 wanted to post something for kashish too!
But, I think I won't be able to do justice after what I posted after the last update...coz that is the best I have written till now and the only one in Hindi That I have ever written n probably will ever write!!!
SO, I AM SORRY FOR REPEATING, BUT I AM REPOSTING THE SAME POEM/THOUGHTS...HERE AGAIN....A TRIBUTE TO KASHISH FROM ME---
 
hum dono anjaan the, ek doosre se bekhabar,
phir kaise achaanak kismat ne jod diya hamen iss kadar....
aapne-apne sapnon ke peeche bhaagte hue,
shaadi ke pavitra rishte se me jude.....
 
zindagi chalti rahi, hum door-door rahe,
par kismat ke haathon hamesha majboor rahe.....
jab ham mile toh kaisi thi woh kashish,
ek baar ki mulaaqaat bani baar-baar milne ki khwahish....
 
ek doosre se bhaagte rahe, par uss ehsaas se kaise bhaage?
jo hamaare dilon ko jodne lagi, uss dor se kaise bhaage.....
jo pyaar panapne lagaa tha dil mein, uss pyaar se kaise bhaage,
jo kashish basi thi zehen me, uss ehsaas se kaise bhaage.....
 
tumne muh mod liya,  mera dil chalni kiya,
maaana koi wada kabhi hamne nahin kiya....
par woh ankahi baaten, woh mulaquaten,
kya woh kisi waade se kam thi??
 
maine apne dil se ladna chod diya,
maan liya ki dil tumhe de diya...
par kya tum bhi kabhi ye maan paaoge?
dil de chuke ho mujhe, kabhi yeh jaan paaoge?
 
jab socha ki alag ho gayen hain raaste...
toh kismat ne phir bana diya hamsafar.....
jab socha ki shayad dil door ho paye tumse,
toh khuda ne tumhe mere paas bhej diya!
 
muh se chaahe kitna hi mana kar lo,
pehle apne jasbaat to kaboo me kar lo...
dekh sakti hun, pyaar hai tumhe bhi mujhse,
phir bhi kinara kar rahi hoon tumse...
 
chaaha ki door chali jaun tumse..
phir kyun nai dekh payi kisis ke saath tumhe?
kyun aaye tum mere peeche, kyun diya pyaar ka woh dard mujhe?
haan, aaj maan liya tumne mohabbat hai tumhe bhi,
dekhna hai kismat kahan le jaati hai ab hamen....
 
Swati
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow! Superb parts!! The ending couldn't have been better!! IT was very honest confession.. LOVELY Part!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
They say all gud things comes to an end...😭
you are ending kashish....hmmmm

lovely part happy that both of them understood....
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Posted: 13 years ago
ohhh i LOVED IT...
OMG i cant believe you ended it 😭...
i loved his confession 😳...
can i be greedy & ask for an epilogue please 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
Okay, i know i posted already, but, since it doesn't feel right, so I  am making another attempt to write something...dedicated to the journey of Kashish...hope it turns out decently!!!
 
They say...Love Happens......But, these two never believed....
They were made for each other, but they never cared...
Till, Destiny decided to play its game......
Bringing them closer and they came....
they were married but had their own lives,
A couple for the world, but for each other no husband /wife....
Stayed at a distance, till their first date,
But, after that nothing could keep them separate...
those unplanned yet planed calls.....
Those expectationless passionate moments....
Though they refused to believe, their hearts were already woven...
The restlessness at being away, the joy on being together....
The Kashish that they shared, was pure, blissful pleasure!!
She finally accepted, yeah she had fallen for her Sexy devil....
while he continued to deny making situation terrible.....
denying their feelings, they again went away,
But when God has some plans, who can get their way...😉
Destiny brought them together again, and this time he couldn't deny...
The feelings that he experienced for her, with her time seemed to fly....
the way she laughed, the way she loved,
the way she cared, the time they shared....
Those sweet little gestures had him flattered,
the thought of her being away had him shattered....
It was finally a blast from the past,
that made him realize that she was his Last!
Finally he confessed, Yes he loved her...
And finally they lived happily ever after!!!!😃
 
the poem above is in red, unlike my usual pink, coz its smeared in the colour of their love......
 
can't thank you enough di for what you have given us!
Hope to find some new ffs from you soon!
Love
Swati
 
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Posted: 13 years ago
VERY NICE.
THEY LIVED HAPPILY EVER AFTER PYAR KI KASHISH
THE END. OHHHHH NO....
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Posted: 13 years ago
fab ending
sad dat it ended
finally maan realised the difference between kashish & pyaar Xx...