Originally posted by Klutszy_KaShian
Res!!
How do you like that??
Haii!! Lo jee edit kar liya khush??
Haii raamm!! GHOR KALYUG ho gaya yaar maine jaldi edit nahi kiya toh aap mera comment delete kar denge?? Vaah bhai bohut acchha hai!! Lol!! Abhi aap na mere yeh comment se please santosh ki jiyega!!
Lol!! Nah!! I still love you!!
Sab!! (I hope u dont mind that)
Haii meri jaan!! Babes ur on a roll!! Itne saare one shots!! N I LOVE THE HAPPY ENDINGS!!! They are amazing!!
Every one shot I have read of yours they all have placed me into some place of surreal serenity. Really I sound like some sort of crazzy philosophic lecturer, but it is true, your writing has some sort of charm to it. It has a great magnetic pull!
Just like the words I have said above this shot was amazing. There may not be as much as depth you wanted but the amount I felt was good. Sometimes if you put too much into a piece of writing, all though you have good intentions, it may overwhelm the reader. In this you beautifully described the emotions Shilpa went through. I was sort of frustrated at first but then I realized wait she is preggos! Lol! Like she was pissing me off, i was like what ever happened to the awesome Shilpa I know!! Then again I was like oh shiitt she is preggas!! N then I was like dayam that is so sweet! Karan was trying to be reasonable!! 🤣 That cracked me up because OMFG!! Shilpa is supposed to be the responsible one and Karan was the one being th good mature husband!! Yet, Karan was correct, Shilpa wearing a halter when she's in her last month!! LMFAOO!!
Lekin, Karan will be Karan, he will always make sure Shilpa gets what she wants!! Haiii kya love story hai!! Karan's apology was the sweetest thing ever. I kept imagining him in tge scene of unforunateky AR's caf projected pictures. Really who cares bout the frikked up KaJen I couldn't stop but imagining KaSh!!
You gave me real KASH magic! Thank you soo much!!
P. S. Thank you so much for making me cry at Karan's amazing dialogues!! Kaunse film mein se chur ye.
Lol nah immaa sure my sabi is very romantic na??
Jinszzyy!!
I AM FIRSSSTTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!! 🤣 🤣 🤣
N COMMMENNT ON THE NEW UPDATE OF MINE!!!!
hey i have absolutely no probs if u call me sab or sabi...
n yes this one i tgried to make lightherated cz the evrytym coming up W*H sth intense gets the stories being monotonous...
I kne shilpa is always mature but u knw during prgnancy u lose ur sanity...nd poor hubbies have to put thru the pains...
n yes..dialogues mein ne chura ye nahin hain..but seeeing ur great pieces....i wd very welll any day steal for them...keep watching🤣
I am so glad u loved it..two more coming up....stay tuned...
