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^^^ now now missy head over to hammies thread and say that ...put ur comments so she can see them 😛 Edited by daya0628 - 12 years ago

oye.missy wapis ah ! abhi tu aye hai aur ja bhi rehi hai...now this is what you call Major Dutta's strategy... wait and watch  the Sher only prowls...jo dil mein hai woh mil jaya ga but as Mishal said " be patient hammie annd have faith missy teray pas wapis aye gi  aur ... tu mera samanay,main teray samana ... and I forgot the rest of the words... shila ho ya munni ashan thay lehni chummi!!        but one has to say Daya hai ahchi lardki humein milwa deya ... noo dokha ... iam still yours

haila socha tha dutta ka accident but nikli madhu thank god dutta is save love the bonding  between dutta and madhu and madhu's idea of proposing nakku👏
Edited by rrs1391 - 12 years ago

superb updt... loved the way Dutta and madhu bonded... luved it to core...

Nice update👏 well written😊

Hey daya,

Love this ff yaar . Its so simple and sweet tasha ff .

Its really a nice update . Loved dutta madhu bonding . So much affection and caring  between bro-sis and the ease of their conversation madhu asking abt first kiss .

Loved how much tasha missed each other and loved their  affectionate hug .

 Actually i loved commenting long . But now i cant since iam preparing for exam .

I will come back with my long comments again after aug 14th . Hope u miss my long long and also  comments until then .

hiya dayathanks for the update😊 one committed writer you are,lucky us the readers..with small

relief to learn that it was not Dutta! good basically you averted a major riot ,brick bats anda whole volley of mention nots!was a wee bit surprised it was Madhu ,funny had not thought of her- Baji's time with her in her trauma condition; the injuries were very wrtten and were easy to imagine -- it's interesting to note the profound impact on one;s self on seeing a loved one in a hospital scenario!..its like emotions run high! drive home: yep impact of seeing some injured makes even the detached and the reserved to open up and say things which they would not say  or find difficult to speak about under normal circumstances'... hence the Dutta &Nakku lovely interaction- expression of caring anxiety ;love; expression of fear of losing some one close; the assuranceof a loved one in terms of future mishap! the small bit where Nakku tells him she thinks Baji loves Madhu,and that she would tell Adhi to end his misinterpreted advances was sweetly lightly hearted. Her updating Dutta about Baji ,Mddhu project links was almost like a wife would brief her hubby about matters and persons of mutual interest!- loved Dutta's dialouge" there should be a rule that kisses should only be meant for the lips"  😛 the whole comdey plot of Baji being gay was quite different and funny ..poor soul felt such a prat! btw here,if it was true it would have been considered a go at a person's sexuality! but  ok Daya, butt humour is humour depending on the audience you are humouring!😉 the irony about the sister issue... good one Daya👏 especially the way it's thrown in ...Bhaiyya aww😭 the high light of the update has to be the Dutta/Madhu conversation; the instant ease;the clicking into place;it's like they were the missing link in each other's lives!
• soo Daya future track marriage on the way? truama when he finds out she really is his sister that to half!; not an issue of his real mother!and as for his father ,heaven alone how Dutta will handle that... but as Madhu has remarked in this update he thinks through ...weeel... waiting  .. for the next bit...after your update of EBR...  XXX Much love hammie, speak to you latersss😊

 

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