hiyaaa daya 😛 birthady hogya xx
thanks for the awaited update! worth waiting for!
Baji/madhu scene: the conovo was laced with reality .Through Madhu you brought home the emotions of a single parent child; a very common thing in Uk, in fact a "conventional nuclear family" is uncommon!Ther words showed how problems between parents create instability in scarring in a child,so much so effects the learning as well.😭 Iwould say very well written and quite tragic at places!
Dutta/Nakku:always loved is the summing up his persona, in this case her words, how he was an allrounder ;an outstandingpupil,with social issues awareness and supported the socially deprievated class of society. well and clevery described in her why she fancied him!👏 Also the fact the factor that a
man who stays away from women ,generally creates an aura in the fair sex ,to gravitated towards him😳!The sweet confession of Nakku as he described "beautiful stalker" was a very interesting read👏.The jump together from a height ,to me was breath😍taking! ... it was a deep plunge in unision,into cementing their love towards each other❤️! an ackowlegdement done in rather a daring manner Dutta style and she, bless her going along with his outrageous action...but the confidence that he was beside her... very well described⭐️
coming home: amused 😛 when he called her porcelain doll! and her reaction.
Entry to the house ...memories😭 of old times ,the same atmosphere;the same close family;the same sly quips from Baji and Roops!oooh😭
The dressing scene,his unexpected entry; his checking her out😉, releasing her tied up tresses😉, and her tying them up again😛, and finally him bangling her wrists with chorriyan❤️ was so tastefully romantic!👏
the last bit was nothing short of😛😛 haaaha!
ooww was looking forward to the party--- can't wait for the update😡
soon I hope ,chaal start at it! lovely update my mate! hammie khush hai teray say! love you loads! xxxhammie
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