Lmaoo all 4 of em tinking n planing against 1 anoda...wel kinda...n 4rm dem all i loved wa baaji wa thinking n ofc...dutta...since im getting rely behtaab 2 see tasha romance...*hint hint*...err did i even need 2 point dis out lol LOL no u did not need to point it out...I know u and ur besharmi thoughts 😆
Oh oh naku geting an idea dat mayb dutta is a playa...?!?!! poor girl was heartbroken 1ce...n now has 2 go thru it all again evn tho its not all true...now dat rely makes me think bout the ff name...waves of life... yup waves of life ...apt hai na lol
Much awaited part...now wa beter idea 4 baji 2 make aadhi dance wit him den bringing dutta in...A POTENTIAL THREAT!! Lmaooo LMAO potential threat 🤣 .Poor aadhi ...
Liven this party!!!!! ROFLLL omg das jus has completly wrng connotations!!! Hahahahaha I know right I died writing it ...cracked up picturing him saying that LOL
N aadhis thoughts wer totaly mking me LMFAOOO ... 'looks like hes ready to become his mister-ess' ahahahahahahahahahaha .I know ...MistER -ess 😆😆 Duji na
Awww bless aadhi u r like d sweetest bro i kno ...thngs u hav 2 do 4 naku...n evn if it means facing ur biggst phobia LOL .he loves her too much .. such a sweet bro...yup facing his phobia and becoming gay for her 😆😆
Ladies...? good excuse but abit 2 common dont u think naku..it was obvious dat u wrnt confy wit it at all lol...making dutta evn mor amused lol .very common thats why i used it lol
YIPEEE U FINALY LISTEND ME N CHOSE LE LE MAZA SONG 4 BAAD!!! Hahahahaa .Yup I had to break that song down ...it took a while to write that and that was the update i wasn't feeling well wen i wrote it...hmm but i did like that song
Oooh am damn sur they wer d big attraction der!! No doubt .OH big crowd cheering looud yaar ...for the new couple in town 😆😆
Hahahaha aadhi n dutta in shock!! Areee abh unki galti toh nahi hai na ukno kya pata tha ke baaji 'come out' like dis...lmaoo .LMAO ...i noe Baaji let loose his true side to everyone :P
Omg i soo can imagine baaji doing his dinchak dinchak dancing n throwing himself at aadhi!!! Hahahahaha I know right he is experienced at throwing himself around while dancing na :P
Omg omg dutta u tight git!! .LOL
I jus knew u wer gona use that trik daya...d whol hero saving heroin by catching her b4 she slips...or rather hero saves his prince charming in dis case LMFAOOO .LOL omg yup...trip and catch scene with BAAD 😆😆😆
Bechara aadhi kahan phaas gaya lol
Gee dutta is soo impatient...he shud kno dat women take der time in washeroom lol...spesh in nakus case hehehe...wa wit hot flushes n all LOL .LOL bechaari naku ran like the wind after all he did to her LOL
Kitni betaabi se naku ki taraf gaya hai lol (AWWW)
Loved the use of d lyrics der sweetie...doobh doobh jaaye ek doosre mein...geee how sweet .like i said i sat there thinking about the lyrics and actions LOL and i was sick so it took forever...lol i was frustrated writing this part
Rely wish he was actualy hugging her n not jus 'as if hugging' lol .LOL that would totally not be appropriate ...he needs to make her feel with out making her run scared that he is like some major player LOL
Awww naku always gets lost in him...eeek was waiting 4 d kiss ...but evn dutta has mor sense den 2 do dis...den us lol .LOL he controlled himself 😆 such a good guy na
Poor girl ...so embarrased...dutta u sucha tease man (ikno ikno i hav sed it b4 but kya karu..he rely is d biggest tease i eva came across lol).well poor girl is getting mad teased lol
Oooh la la raat ke nashe mein kuch toh definatly baat hai!!! .lol yup
Ha naku das d whole point...but wa if it rely cums tru lmao...ikno daya das not ur intention atm but nva u can always chnge ya mind lol .LOL no no ...not changing my mind :P
Ooohhh dont i always love it wen eva dutta comes 2 the rescue of his damsel in distress!!! .haye haye ...Dutta knight in shining armour
Man but rely wishd dutta gav dem mor den a punch...saale issi layak hain!!! impact of that in next part na :P
Disgusting ppl...naku was soo shokd n horrified...no wonda dutta hamara itna angry tha...tho i loved dat part...shows hw much he cares 4 her ... .thanks ...glad u like that i wanted to really stick that in there :P
Awww dutta cudnt drive cuz he was soo angry....yup so angry he might of broke the steering wheel off 😆
Aww beti t hurt him wen he saw her crying... .oh it hurt like crazy :P
Rely wished he cud b der 4 her now...insted of aadhi...wud hav sucha sweet romantic caring tasha scne...hayeee .dw u will get tasha scenes :)
Geez baji dont u understand dis is not like any other time n any other girl...this is naku...duttas naku!!! right!
man mein toh thaak gayi...wil coment on nxt chap asap...til den enjoy readin dis1 lol oh love I enjoyed it ...thank you for lovely comments ...
for not giving me tasha in this epi and then rubbing it in by ending it when the two are alone........so here goes your lappy......
and then i wan't to scream
girl what made u think i was waiting this long to hear about DP Sir's love ishtory ............... LOL i almost forgot about him in this story ...i had to bring him in and lol i will give u some tasha in next part but then I threw in that surprise that ur gonna hate because of ur pm ...so wat u will read soon is ur fault... :P
now u better make up for it and give me only tasha next time...........otherwise you be ready to face the consequences😡ok feeling better now after that outburst.........coming to the first part.......was enjoyable the way ria, sameer and adhi teased nakku......and oh she is so smitten by him😳☺️......and none can blame her........D does have that effect.😳.......we do empathize don't we😉 haha yup .....thatz Dutta's affect on people :Poye my baaji is BP now...😡....mmmmm.....so dutta is what HB- heart beatI am not sure for dutta code name yet...still thinking :Pok so now nakku has come into her own.......kitna bolti hai tu form😛......cracking jokes to a serious dutta......aaaaaaaaahhhhh mera gussa wala dutta.☺️.....yes he is mighty upset at not being able to have rightfully stood up for his woman.......😳....so what has he to say to her......................will wait........ haha yup mighty upset and watch to see wat the effect of that was 😃and why am i feeling this man standing across the road is adhi😆😆😆 i dunno u'll have to wait and see 😉
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