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OH Dhayaniiii !

omg... wt a funi update..esp adhi n baji's so called dostana...lol.. baji duin it al on purpose? cos he obv nws adhi dunt like gay ppl..lol

Originally posted by: kiran255

OH Dhayaniiii !

What an update !

you deserve a standing ovation!

 what an amazing dostana track !

i will be commenting from bottom !

baaji is indeed super hero of this uupdate !

im imagining him and laughing my face off !
hatts off to you and Missy !

MIshelz for the  idea nad u to write down so so so well!

oh the last line 

Baaji holds Adhi hand s

hahhahahahahha

Adhi is soooooooooo gonna regret calling Naku his gf !

ahahahahahahahh

and now wohoooo from start 

Dutta is so desperate ro get his revenge !
love how u describe their own feeling towards eachother !

im so loving it :D

and what awesome dressing u chose fro guy specially Dutta !
im sure he must be looking super hawwwwttttttttttttt :P

and no Sups again and Nakuuu getting all jealous is awesome idea !
awesome job Dhayaniiiii 

and sammer is back , so sweet !

and Dutta took Naku to dance with her !
wohooooooooooooo 

and tehn my Baaji did all the wonders !
Gosh this one is hilariousssss !

Im so loving it !
my tteth all out superbbbbbbbbbb !

Love it :D

way to go 

im just waiting for next updateeeeeeee !

THANKS! 😃
yay! so I did justice to your expectations :)
hahaha missy made me finish last night
and post it ....lol initially was gonna post that track as next update
but for her sake started it now
lmao I actaully had a lot of fun writing it
and omg what I'm gonna do next....D&N aren't the only ones
going to be dancing 😆😉 but lol I have work today
and uni to focus on for bit and u noe this track needds
a lot of thought 😆 so might be a while for the next one
it took me forever to write this one ....

Originally posted by: Yuvika_15

omg... wt a funi update..esp adhi n baji's so called dostana...lol.. baji duin it al on purpose? cos he obv nws adhi dunt like gay ppl..lol

 

awww naku gtin jealous... haha thank god supriya went away... nw tasha's dance...hpe its romantic...lol...wonder wt convo they'll hav whilst dancing...

 

aww sam's ria's fiance, wel gd thing he didnt address ria as ria cos they al r pretending tht ria is naku n naku is ria

thanks omg i took lots of time to write this....and lots of harassment
i do intend on making the dance romantic
as for Sam calling Ria by name u kno I m wrote by accident in there ...thnk god i picked it up😆
I had to go back and make sure he wasn't using her name....
Baaji&Aadhi ❤️

Originally posted by: dg0628

thanks omg i took lots of time to write this....and lots of harassment lol..m nt surprised it took long, it was an awesome update... n a LONNNNGGG update..keep these long updates coming😳
i do intend on making the dance romantic wil b looking fwd 2 it...so wen do u think ur gna update next?😆😉
as for Sam calling Ria by name u kno I m wrote by accident in there ...thnk god i picked it up😆
I had to go back and make sure he wasn't using her name....
Baaji&Aadhi ❤️

@alveera... pls avoid usings caps lock in ur comment as its against IF rules

Originally posted by: Yuvika_15

i would make a call on wen to update next but am usually wrong😆
i dunno it depends on how productive I am for uni ....lots to do for this week
and although I got plans for the next one I have continued it....
we'll see
long updates eh.... i noe they have actually grew in size....lol will try to keep it that way 😃

Originally posted by: Sophia21

Reserved :)

 

~Edited~

Hailaaa i gave u the idea of the dinner?😲😆 n i dnt even know😆 

But ur welcome anyway😆 hehe yeah frm ur comment for the previous 1 ...I replied to it to :)

Now now... OMG... What did you do to my baaji?😲

He's acting all gay, freaking the hell out of Aadhi🤣

Poooor Aadhi... blessss him😳 omg fun times 😆😆

Ergh Supriya🤢 But im glad she doesnt like Dutta and didnt flirt with him😃😆 omg yeah i just needed a name and hers popped in lol figured I'd make some use out of her and pack her up fast😆

Awww Nakku gettin all jealous and angry😳 Bless her..

Well i have to give it to Dutta for playing along like that.

Dnt hate the player, hate the game😉 She started the whole thing😆 exactly!

Now that Sameer is here, they need to involve him in their plans.. I kno i almost made the mistake of him sayin Ria lol wen talkin but caught on fast😆

before he expose them unknowingly😆

I love how he just took her to the dance floor...

Hayeeeeeee... Will their dance continue in the next update? yes ....along with some other moments with B-A and D-B-A and DN  lol hmmm maybe more!

And Ahem the dostana just started init😆 I have orders to make this a track and keep it going until Madhu comes it lol ....now i dunno if it'll be that long...

Bhagoooo Aadhi bhagoooo🤣🤣🤣  LOL 😆

 

Awesomeeeee hilarious updateeee... Thanks :)

Cnt wait for the next part😃 Update sooon😳

OMG Really..aadhi baaji track going on till Madhu comes? 🤣🤣

Originally posted by: Suvi7884

OMG Really..aadhi baaji track going on till Madhu comes? 🤣🤣

LoL possibly...it will go on even past the dinner thing...
LMAO...what i do for ppl 😆
and I'm already thinking of what to do for baaji aadhi (or as Missy named them = BAAD 🤣)
he this is one interesting track even for me to write.....and it came up out of no where too...