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Iridescence

@Iridescence1

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kiran255
OH Dhayani !

You cruel you make my Dutta time at cafe so hard
bechara DUtta he was fuming with anger !
he wanted to hold ADi and get the trurth out of his mouth !

and Naku hiding from Dutta
awwwwwwwww sweety but she has no idea what his brither is up to !

its getting so interestinga nd icing on the cake Ria tells everyone
she is MEHra daughter
gosh !
now DUtta will think ADi is with Naku !
poor baby !
Dhayani thats bad !

OH god
i love the mind talks which D, B , A were talking with themselves !
and adi was so sad at knowing Naku will leave him !
sweet !
cant wait !

i want next part jaldi say :D
ahhh the handshake :D
superb update

cruel? 😲 lol ...no worries will fix the confusion soon
Dutta's soo in love ...just wait till he finds out Naku also likes him
I will try to speed it up a bit and get their romance started
Ria had a reason for switching names.. and I have to still develop some ideas....
thanks for the comments....
i have not written anything after where i ended lol
so once I write it will post it :-)
Edited by dg0628 - 13 years ago

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Naina :)

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Posted: 13 years ago

Nakku loves him......awwww....amazing update dhanya...thanks for the PM upload asap.....*hugs*

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Frosty_Moon

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Posted: 13 years ago

hey dear nice update

so aadhi ne dutta ko bahut irritate kiya by talking about nakku indirectly and now he thinks nakku is of aadhi

interesting dear

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madhvi

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Posted: 13 years ago

really liked ur ff....plz pm me whenever you update

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Sonee

@ShuVin

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey dhayani🤗

Awesome updates dear...loved d bro n sis convo...dat ws really cute..😳 n omg cafe scenerio ws awesoem D n B trying to understand...n aadhi..ohh god...he is too much...wow,..dey all seat...together...wow...wht an u turn ria,..nice👏 aw D still attract towards her.,,..hw cute...omg ..handshake...n she is just blbbring in her mind,..soo natural n real😆 awesome writ up dhayani,...loved it....thnks for pm ...tk care..😳

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Iridescence

@Iridescence1

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Posted: 13 years ago

@everyone : Thanks for the comments 🤗 ...means a lot 😃

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568986

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Posted: 13 years ago

love this uppate jus as much as others lol...it was sooo funy n sweet..

plz update jaldi karo...n thnx 4 pm.x

ps.sory 4 such a short coment lekin hav 2 start on another essay n need 2 finish it by tmrw..soo....

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alveera_rckz

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Posted: 13 years ago

Awesome updates as alwayz lol...it was sooo funy n sweet..

update soon Edited by alveera_rckz - 13 years ago

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Iridescence

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mIsHeZ.x
love this uppate jus as much as others lol...it was sooo funy n sweet..

plz update jaldi karo...n thnx 4 pm.x

ps.sory 4 such a short coment lekin hav 2 start on another essay n need 2 finish it by tmrw..soo....

thanx missy 🤗...been missing ur comments 😊
lol I'm actually going to start writing the next part right now!
and no worries short or long comment still means a lot :)
and anyway school ....errrr ...uni (my hands even have a habit of typing that lol...i'm gonna work on saying uni from now on lmao) comes first :-)

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568986

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: dg0628

thanx missy ...been missing ur comments
lol I'm actually going to start writing the next part right now!
and no worries short or long comment still means a lot :)
and anyway school ....errrr ...uni (my hands even have a habit of typing that lol...i'm gonna work on saying uni from now on lmao) comes first :-)

aww missing u2 bby🤗🤗🤗

will be waiting 4 da update sweetie😃😃

hehe lookz lyk am a gud influenc 😉😆😆 haha😳

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