Yaaay i managed to read all ur ff now, i gt d dy off...cz i gt a doctor's appt in a abt an hour, so gt 2 read ur ff😊
ok gonna try to round off all d chapters in 1 go ere😉, so bear wid me lol.
So at 1st I wz abt wary abt d story startin wid Naku hvin nt 1 bt 2 kids😆, and wondered how it wud all start, cz u no wen der's lyk a drift between dem already, u kinda feel ur heart skippin a beat lool, but den u really told d story well.
wow, wow, wow, is all i can say 2, hpe m nt soundn 2 much lyk Kiran 😆. Great story, so orginal, nt seen or told b4, and if it is, den ur doin n even better job dat i cnt tell 😃😳.
I really luv lil Raj he's so cute, n I especially luv dat he's gt Dutta in him😉...wish i cud pinch his cheeks lol, n Ananya...well if i had bin in her position i wud run 2 my Dad 2, i fink gals r mostly always closer to der fathers😳
Most of d tym while I was readin through the chapters, I kinda grew a little smile on the corners of my mouth lol, readin d sweet little remarks 4rm Naku's kids here n der....it sooo saawwweeett😉
I so luv d way d way ur keeping the past in d same tense as the present😉😉👏
n I can def c y u dedicated d last chapter to Yuvi, aaww at least she gets 2 c Baji and Madhu 2geva.
n last but def nt least, I soooo luv d dhamki's ur givin lol to d readers 2 edit der posts😆😆, dat literally make me laugh 2 myself😆😆, speakin of wich i gtta giv a piece of my mind to mish.....
😲*she gave me a taana lol*😲
G8 g8 story, but pls update soon, n I hope ur k nw, (wt happend), m gonna start readin Shilpita's ff nw😳
n I will comment from hereforth😃
tc hun, n pls update soon, I will 2 if u do 1st😉...hpe we gt a deal der😉😉
oh n I totally 4gt....pls pls pls dnt dnt anything to the twins pls, Sophie I'm begging u, I cnt stand 2 c anything happened to children, pls😭
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