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..Life is Strange?!? [SG SS] * Completed* P43, 47 (Page 3)

agreatperhaps IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 14 March 2011 at 3:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by RadhikaBhushan

nivriti come to chat club .....
I read ur reply of ur my reply...
N yah u can use ideas ....
Come to cc we can chat abt dis...
Aww... Thanks alot!
And the club which you newly made is the chat club? Sorry I don't actually know much about IF!
I have written a little about the next part let me see..
Should I get it reviewed by you or shall I ask only when I need your help?Confused

BabajiKaThullu IF-Addictz

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Posted: 14 March 2011 at 3:11am | IP Logged
of course u cn ask me yup jo new chat club hai tu waha aa.

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Posted: 14 March 2011 at 3:44am | IP Logged
Hey dear wat an updt!!!!!!
Awsm yar,mje pta tha dat u wiill rck .
u r a rockstar dear superb,luvly.
plz plz cnt wid nxt part soon.
aur i hv told u befre to add me to ur pm list,plz add me to ur pm list.
n thnx dear u r a wndrful writer.
luv u
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its too gud
seriously very niceSmile
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Nice OS.

Please pm me too.
agreatperhaps IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 14 March 2011 at 6:04am | IP Logged
Hey Guys,
I thought of updating the next part...
Life Is Strange...
Part II
(At the Hospital)

Sam's POV:

I was busy waiting for Gunjan outside the room where the doctor was checking her. I was praying to God that nothing serious comes out. *Fingers-Crossed*!

Suddenly I saw something' In fact someone! And it was'



I tried my best not to let her see me but no luck for me I guess..

POV Ends


S: This can't be her! No ways! Not now!

Sh: Hey Sam! What a pleasant surprise! What are you doing here?

Samrat ignores her.The Doctor enters..

D: Uh Mr. Shergill can I speak to you for a minute?

S: Sure' (walks in with her to the ward where Gunjan is sitting)

D: So Mrs. Shergill, will you do the honors or shall I say it to your husband?

G: (afraid) Yyyyy' You tell!

S: What's the matter doctor?

D: Um.. Mr. Shergill! Your wife is 1 week pregnant!

S: (Takes a deep breath in relief) Oh! (Soon realizes) What? Really? This can't be true!

D: (giggles) That depends on you Mr. Shergill!

S: Um, Doc! Can I talk to my wife for a minute in private?

D: Sure why not!

Doctor leaves!

G: What happened Samrat? Do you regret this baby?

S: No stupid! I can't kiss you in front of the doctor! Can I?

G: (blushes) No you can't!

Samrat moves forward to the bed where Gunjan is sitting. He cups her face in his palms and slowly brings her in front of him! Gunjan blushes and bends her head down! But then Samrat puts his finger on her chin and raises it up'

S: Thanks Baby! I Love you!

G: I Love you too! {Blushes}

And then... Samrat slowly pulled Gunjan towards her. Gunjan started to breathe heavily but they both come closer and closer. Gunjan finally closed her eyes. And Samrat out his arm on her waist, Gunjan's hand was on his chest. And then their lips met. Softly brushing past each other. Slowly it turned into a passionate one. Gunjan hands go around his neck, holding his hair. Samrat's hand caressing her waist. They left each other which what seemed eternity. Gunjan blushed and hid her head in Samrat's chest, tightly clutching his shirt. Samrat smiles and reciprocates with the hug.

S: Chashmish! Thank you so so much!

G: No need to thank me sweety!

Suddenly there is a knock at the door. They leave each other and the doctor enters.

D: Sorry to interrupt you but we need you Mr. Shergill to complete a few formalities... And we would like to keep Mrs. Shergill in the hospital for a day. No need to worry it is a part of the formality! Would you please come and sign a few papers Mr. Shergill?

S: Sure! {turns to Gunjan} You take some rest (winks) I'll be back!

G: (tries her best to hide her blush) Fine!

Samrat and the doctor leave the room!

Samrat completes all the formalities and exits the doctor's cabin!

He sees Sheena is waiting for him. He is about to go when she holds his hands..

Sh: Where did you vanish?
S:None of your business be happy with yourself!

Sh: Of Course it is! I care about you (innocently)

S: Oh really! Then why the hell did you try to separate me and Chashmish?

Sh: Oh Come on Samrat! It's not me who seperated the two of you! It's your own deeds mind you!

S: I have not come here to hear your nonsense' Please leave me and Chashmish alone!

Sh:I love you Samrat! Cry

S: But I hate you! You betrayed me! Angry
Sh: What's my mistake in it? Even you are a share holder in it!

S: Me, (laughs sarcastically!) Me and shareholder in betraying myself! You are mad Sheena!

Sh: Yes. I am mad. Madly in love with you Samrat. How could you? You were the one who played with my feelings and you are saying I'm speaking nonsense?

S: Its not me but you who played with feelings. Not only mine but everyone's. And most importantly Chashmish's feelings. You are the only reason why she cried. You are the only reason why she sacrificed her love. Do you even know how much pain you recieve when the person you love is actually in love with someone else? No you won't! Because you don't have feelings. You don't care like the way my Chashmish does...

Sh: Chashmish! Chashmish! Can you ever think about anything rather than her?Angry

S: No! She is my life and my wife! It would be better if you leave us to alone with our happiness'

Sh: Your happiness? What about mine Samrat?

S: Oh! How could I forget! You only care about yourself... I'm your fan Shee-nah!LOL

Sh: You are my fan?Smile
S:Are you what? Ms. India or Ms. Universe?Angry Anyways! I don't want to spoil my good mood just because of your stupid rubbish Ms. Shee-nah Malho-trah! 

Precap: * I promise I'll get you back Sam! No matter what it takes!

                * I'll not let you work Chashmish!

                 * Sajan Romantic Moments....
Love Nivriti!Heart

Edited by SajanRox - 14 March 2011 at 6:12am

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Posted: 14 March 2011 at 6:20am | IP Logged

Edited by nishi_sajan - 14 March 2011 at 6:20am
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Posted: 14 March 2011 at 6:29am | IP Logged
wonderful part jst loved it
keep it up
n do cntinue soon

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