I am free - VIREN | Chaand Chupa Badal Mein

mittusingh

@mittusingh

Senior Member

Posted: 13 years ago

I am free!!

I am free to laugh out loud

I am free to cry my heart

I am free to let it be

I am free to forget the past

I am free to sleep in the night

I am free to wake up to the bright

I am free to give love to my best

I am free to feel your love

I am free to hold you tight

I am free to give my best

I am free to see u in the eye

I am free to hear your call

I am free to break from this trance

I am free to breathe in deep

I am free to be true to the rest

I am free to know the real myself

I am free!!

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Payal

@Scintillating

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Posted: 13 years ago

Wow Mythri!!! 🤗 That is a beautiful poem. Loved it to the core. 😊

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mittusingh

@mittusingh

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Posted: 13 years ago

awww thanks payal...u r a sweet heart!!

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anuragtani4ever

@anuragtani4ever

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Posted: 13 years ago

I enjoy reading your poems. And this one was especially nice since it seemed, to me, as if Viren was shouting this out and a burden was slowly dropping off of him. It goes well with the current track.

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gmann2010

@gmann2010

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Posted: 13 years ago

Simply beautiful Mythri, loved it.

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-sweetheart-

@-sweetheart-

IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 13 years ago

wowwwww!!!!!👏

beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!🤗🤗

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BIackSwan

@BIackSwan

IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 13 years ago

aww mittu too sweeeeeeet like chocolate.... 🥳

im lovin it.....

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Monica

@moniluvskinshuk

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Posted: 13 years ago

woww Mythri lovedd it . It so beautifully tells Viren's feelings .

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361344

Posted: 13 years ago

BEAUTIFUL !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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BIackSwan

@BIackSwan

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Posted: 13 years ago

sweet hearts i gotta go now.... time to go home

byeeeeeeeeeeeeee mwaaaaaaaah 🤗 🤗

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