mY dEfleCtiVE ShaDe GamE oVEr (level THREE)!!! (Page 2)

chick16. Groupbie

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Posted: 14 March 2011 at 7:15am | IP Logged

what was this!!!
anodr epic frm u

sachin's experience really made meh feel bad!

VIIVEK......what can i say, everytym my hrt missed a beat at regular intervals..! such a brave fear of those snakes and greatly portrayed by you ClapClap

then abhi sir.....mind blowing part & that metal pierced in his throat n how he takes it out is like beyond imagination for me..!

Finally Daya sir....
man! i didn't jus' believe wt u wrote . everytym i had 2 think whether to read the next lyn or not....i really felt drowsy...had goosebumps.... nd tears for a moment.....i can imagine hw much u luv daya! 

& ACP sir...wat a pain n anger he goes through to c his dear officers struggling lyk dis just for him.... & he just simply can do  NOTHING!

my leg was constantly moving while reading the story.

n dis culprit.....soo helpful
matlab,,,, hez just playin wid d emotions of d team n testing like am sure he'z gonna be disclosed as someone well-known 2 d team

jus' a complaint or rather a suggestion
y is everytym d whole cid team caught so easily....?!?!
i mean....c'mon dude..DIS IS CID!!
n den wen dey finish off a level...according 2 you they can do nothing but jus' caught again 2 play another freaking level!
thodi investigation tow agay badhao gadhadada, koi struggle, koi fighting..kuchh tow!
this jus' shows that cid is nothing but a toy to play for d insane culprit aftr every month!
datz nt gud!!

n ur blood usage iz lyk so on earth can somebody be in so much blood like dat???
well dis blood thingy is my view .......baaki u've really succeeded in making another more difficult level..! =)

Just please keep dese things in mind while writing ur level

varna u r really an osm writer...u can express the situation in beautiful words!

i hope u just dun' have any prob. wid my review (complaints)...
i jus' posted it as a regular reader.....being no intentions! Smile

Last but not the least...

waiting 2 get another thriller frm ya! :D ;)

LadyMeringue IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 10793

Posted: 14 March 2011 at 7:24am | IP Logged
Well, what to say!!! As usual you have put in your best effort and you've passed out with flying colours!!!! Fantastic story, very well portrayed!!!! Keep it up yaar, you're doing a great job!!!Big smileBig smileBig smile
Hasini_smile Goldie

Joined: 07 April 2010
Posts: 1383

Posted: 14 March 2011 at 7:40am | IP Logged
WOW!! wat a thriller yaar..
very nice as your previous ones..
I felt vivek part was very scary (bcoz iam very much scared of snakes)
I liked DAYA's attitude this time especially when he says "khoon bahut  thunda tha, aaindha aur  khayal rakhna", tht was superb!!
Your writing style is very good.. i can see the scenes infront of my eyes while reading..
great going.. all the best for your next part..Thumbs Up

Edited by moonlight5 - 14 March 2011 at 7:42am
shreela Goldie

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Posts: 1509

Posted: 14 March 2011 at 9:42am | IP Logged
AWESOME!! it is a real thriller this time!ClapClapClapClap dunno, after reading the first part of your story, I dreamt about it at night. and this one, oh, what to say, it's the best part ever.StarStar I really felt pain on my wrist and throat while reading duo's experience. Cry superb work  done this time.Star keep it up.Thumbs Up
gadhadada IF-Addictz

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Posted: 14 March 2011 at 12:50pm | IP Logged

hmmmmm.... this time i m really STUNNED and SPEECHLESS..... in a core of my heart.... there was a FEAR that may be i was NOT up to the MARK... this time..... i felt... i dragged the level and exaggerated it..... and may be MY READERS did not digest it..... that why at the FIRST para... i APPOLOGIZE to all in ADVANCE..... BUT...... GALS/GUYS..... wat a FANTABULOUS feedback and response from U all.....
i have NO words to say my HEARTIEST and HUMBLE THANK YOU to ALL of U.....
and the best part.... that every reader gave its own perception about the level... the gripped and lose point both.... thats really helped me alot...
i m really thankful.... really really....

NEEME DII..... NOTEPAD (ur double ovation).... CHICK..... RASHIDA champ.... MOONLIGHT5.... SHREELA.... POOJA.... AANDROMEDA DII and all.... who PERSONALLY and PROFESSIONALLY both pat on my shoulder..... and really appreciate my work.....

tons..... bundlez.... loads... bunches... buckets.... stacks.... cartons of

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gadhadada IF-Addictz

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 12:20am | IP Logged

hey where r U.............. SHIVANI n ASTONISH n MALLIKABALU too??????

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Hasini_smile Goldie

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 12:38am | IP Logged
waiting for your next level..
gadhadada IF-Addictz

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 12:43am | IP Logged

sure MOONLIGHT..... i m workin on it...... if U want to share any of UR idea.... feel free to PM me............

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