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WOW!! wat a thriller yaar..
very nice as your previous ones..
I felt vivek part was very scary (bcoz iam very much scared of snakes)
I liked DAYA's attitude this time especially when he says "khoon bahut thunda tha, aaindha aur khayal rakhna", tht was superb!!
Your writing style is very good.. i can see the scenes infront of my eyes while reading..
great going.. all the best for your next part..ππΌ
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