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Mayank&Nupur:With You...Last Part Pg 33 (Page 30)

saraaa. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 23 April 2011 at 10:51am | IP Logged
Youu write soo beautifully <3 Ahh you just got me hooked! Aww I feel soo bad for Nupur as she wanted only his love and not pityOuch Gunjan is sucha nicee diEmbarrassed I lovee her presence. This was superb and im actually kinda sad that you're almost done with this..but anyways great ending too ..Big smile

valliyah Goldie

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Posted: 26 April 2011 at 8:31am | IP Logged
update soon please...!!!
love.mayurarti IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 27 April 2011 at 8:25am | IP Logged
superb update
feel bad fr nupur n fr mayank, its nt easy to accept such things...he needs time to understand everything
hope everything will be fine soon
thousandmiles IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 27 April 2011 at 9:38am | IP Logged

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JaeeDevRathore Goldie

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Posted: 27 April 2011 at 9:41am | IP Logged
Sajjal dear - what a beautiful ending ... I just loved reading this story ... The every word you wrote burst a volcano of emotions in me ... It was just perfect - the pain that pity gives is huge and no one likes to pitied and you know why I liked it all because you brought the reality - he tried to run away and that is natural but he came back and that is love ... Her fear was true and I really loved the ending how you brought out the whole scenario - in very simple words you brought out the reality of their lives ... I am glad you didn't give it a sad ending ... This couldn't be anymore perfect ... This is one of the main reasons why I love reading what your write - they just pull the strings of my heart and I actually feel each and every emotion ...

Great job dear,
God bless you ...
Jaee D. Rathore

Edited by -jaee- - 06 May 2011 at 11:22pm

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Fantasia. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 27 April 2011 at 11:09am | IP Logged


O.M.G princess..This could'nt be more perfect!! .. beautiful .. and this story was written in a very serne and classic way!! I enjoyed very bit of it and that pity issue was so rightly adressed, a main problem in such relations.

and i sooo adored the family scene in the end..*sigh*..i have teary eyes..

Excellent princess..this was a master piece as always!!

love uu..God bless..

Edited by Fantasia. - 07 May 2011 at 8:49am

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gopi06 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 29 April 2011 at 8:34pm | IP Logged
awesome updt sajjal
hope everything will be fine soon...cont soon
thanks for the pm

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AmyArTiMayUr IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 30 April 2011 at 8:56am | IP Logged
Me waiting for an update...the last 2 parts were good as usual...but hated to see Nupur go through so much pain...i hope Mayank realises and comes back to herSmileSmile

And plz dont make this a story with a sad ending...plz plz plzzz...

And update as soon as you get time okaySmileSmile

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