Mayank&Nupur:With You...Last Part Pg 33 - Page 6

Posted: 13 years ago
Part 1 is amazing

nice story

cont soon
Posted: 13 years ago
Sajjal excellent writing dear...
I ws so engrossed in the story...Can feel nupur's pain...Glad that atleast gunjan is by her side and loved gunjan's answer to her mom...
And my heart just stopped beating for a second when mayank first saw her...
Now looking forward to the fist eye contact...
Cont soon...
Posted: 13 years ago
congo on starting new one๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Ši love the way u write....
thnx for the pm๐Ÿ˜Š
Posted: 13 years ago
tht was soooooooo niceeeeee part
Posted: 13 years ago
fantastic update....cont soon
Posted: 13 years ago
๐Ÿ˜Šwow
just superb writing 
loving the story๐Ÿ˜Š
Posted: 13 years ago
aww... sajjal!
cute update....
aww.. poor nupur.... she's sufferin soo much!!!
Mayu.. already fallin 4 nupur..
luvd it!
continue soon!
Posted: 13 years ago
fabulous update
gunjan was sooo naughty n caring...luved nupur n gunjan bond
the way u describe nupur n violin part was amazing....luved mayank eagerness n restlessness
beautifully written...
Posted: 13 years ago
its been narrated beautifully ....seems like a classical story n tht im loving abt it

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