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nice one sajjal.....

congratz for ur new ss!

update soon
and pm me

v interesting

Awesome start....

Loved the update!

wow new ff lovely 

OH MY GOD!! now that was extra-ordinary!  👏 👏

i LOVED the writing expression, so different from what u write before, the characters are amazing and teh bonding and conversation was so natural! loved it! keep it up princess!

nupur committing  suicide! damn it! my heart was caught in a fist! spectacular work!

OMG so many twists and turns in just one update??
BTW it was awesome and really i didn't expected a single thing before i read.....
the way you described mayank's parents i thought they were mayank and nupur and they were not....
and i thought savitri's daughter is nupur and it became gunjan........
i thought gunjan despised nupur but not and finally at the end i thought gunjan ran towards samrat's house, i mean the guy whom gunjan is in love with........ but it was nupur and is she trying to kill herself?????
yaar tune tho kamaal kar diya yaar...........
maar daala sach mein......
waiting for teh next update

OMGG sajjal di.. awesome story and that too with great part1..

please do continue soon! nw dat mayank has finally seen her.. i wanna knw the further story..

wanna knw mre abou nupur!