I loved your story...but I feel bad the whole family of Handa is treating Geet...
Maan should find about her family and the way they are treating her and give them a good piece of his mind... Also geet luck should change and all those people who were telling her that she is bad omen to the family should get a jolt when she is not around.
Try to write that she will bring luck to the people around her.
Sorry if I wrote too much...but I dont like people who treat girls as they are bad omen.
please update soon and pm me
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