Posted: 28 August 2011 at 10:00am | IP Logged
Hey dear Shilp
So so Sorry for the delay yaar...but rozay and eid preprations...and uni kept me busy ...
Though Ive read the update the day you posted but could not log in for longer time
to post my comment ...add to that im always short of words when writing anything about your updates...its just like suraj ko diya dikhana ...
I Loved Loved the update...Read it many times...as much I enjoyed "Tug of War" which is my most fav one So has been this chapter...
Yet again a very visible contrast b/w Tasha...these two are so different from each other at times
but the best part is when one of them is inclined towards the wrong the other is there to rectify it...
Though Dutta is more understanding and Im pleasently surprised that he is very patient too when it comes to things related to naku in particular
The way naku is acting now a dayz...hats off to that mans patience!!!
She has changed...she has changed Very Much!!!...Specially she is taking every thing in a negative way...May it be Sonus ambition our Dutta's intentions regarding the continuation of her studies
The Lift part was truly an eye opner for naku...and glad she got the point
I never expected that naku would land up in that lift ...the most i expected was she would be found sobbing in the room or in kitchen...but you always add beauty to all the scenes making them exceptional ...so was the lift part
I loved the convo in that lift...Dutta was at his best..leaving nakusha simply speechless...more as a friend ...Guide...and lastly as a caring partner
Nakusha's Low confidence is her biggest draw back...though she was much improved after adjusting to some extent with Mumbai...as we encountered her during their honeymoon phase and few other times
but ever since this Sonu issue came into question...she is coming to conclusions without giving things a secong thought...
But still I felt bad for naku a lot...because she has been always reminded of the fact that she is The Unwanted...specially by those who thought that this mismatched jodi [in their eyes though] will not last long...ewww...Its very common Shilpi that when people could not digest the fact that two people can live happily that too when one of them is exceptionally brilliant and the other one is ordinary...they do say such things just to degrade that person...
same has been with nakusha for she has always under estimated herself ...
I liked kala's inputs too making naku realizethat life has given her a second chance :-)
The Scene in the kitchen was also very well written...very logical example given..
The last two parts were just like fresh air...Awesome!!!
That radio call was very funny...even im very fond of tuning radio...and encountered many such calls
where people come with damn funny issues ...
When i read that radio call part...i read that twice ...thrice...thinking that I might missed the song which the boy asked for...and was wondering are you planning to skip that part that which song was that but kudos to your writing skills...you brought it in beautifully...it sounded heavenly that way *dreamy muh*
The song was so apt for them at that moment...specially I loved the line of raising White Flag...thats the key to a successful relation na
I loved that barh k sign kar diye hain
line a lot...it sounded so cute ...so much like naku
And that kolahpur k achaar ka masla
...hahaha...no wonders the cardio surgeon was left speechless for few seconds
Awww...I loved that pleased and proud smile from dutta after seeing that admission form...dil khush hogaya
University life would be totally a new world for naku...im too eager to read about her experiences there..
Hope it will help to raise her confidence...the more she will interact with different people ...
Rest Her Hubby is always by her side...Lucky Girl !!!
Thanks a lot for this fabulous update and for pm too
Waiting for the next part impatiently
Take care...Loads of Love
Edited by Warda. - 31 August 2011 at 2:25pm