LOved both the updates ...im sorry im commenting bit late...as im buzy due to my exams...but just logged in to check your update...as you mostly update on weekends...and here i get my double treat :-)
Firstly the title happy everafters gave me a mini heart attack...lol
i thought you are trying to wind it up...and i quickly checked the last line to be continued...and phewww... :-)
the kitchen scene in chp 16 was so cute and romantic...
and naku still thinking about her siblings and postponed her marriage..awww i just love her character...and even dutta cooperated ...i knew it hes going to do that...although he wanted to get married asap :-)
leela is a bit apprehensive about their relation...hmmm...guess she herself suffered a lot ...thats why shes not sure that even those people who are poles apart from each other can live happily with each other...actually she has seen the timid side of naku...but as dutta mentioned Not only because I am too stubborn to give up'but also because she is too much of a wildcat to give up on me. ...
i really liked the line where dutta says that how could he be sure that this marrige is going to work...that is such a realistic reply... the answer was just bang on!!
and the last scene of this update was the cutest :-)
brilliant update...
chp 17... i have to start with kala...im so much in love with this character ...the way she showers her love on these three kids ...truly filling the place of there mom...the concern she was showing for debus exams...and even dutta was well aware of it...loved it the way he was asking the details of his papers...reminds me of uday ...who even forgot sonu's name once in the earlier part ...
and debu is such a naughty child...cant believe he didnt corrected his answer sheet just bcos he was bore of writing...lol
and secondly...where naku comes with her bridal dress...aww kala is sad that naku is going to leave in afew weeks...the whole part was really emotional :-(
And dutta calling every evening for naku...loved there fone convos...
specially the way you mentioned all the small details of there postures...i could clearly picture the whole scene:-)
meethu is such a sweet name ...and the punishment given by dutta is so cute...lol...
and dutta is still smoking...no wonders naku was suspicious about the kasam :-)
pinky part was so sad...aww...poor girl was suffering a lot from months...and dutta was so attached wid the lil girl...thank god naku was there to pacify him...and even leela witnessed that...
and their wedding was truly an exceptional one...specially the raining part made it even more memorable...brilliantly written :-)
and the small bits where dutta did a few silly things ...lol
im sure that pandit is not going to forget this groom...lol
and the last part where he holds when she was abut to fall is really symbolic...im sure hes going to be there when ever shes going to fall at any point of her life :-)
stay blessed tasha... :-)
waiting for the next part eagerly...pls update sooonnn :-)
and thanks a ton for the pm :-)
Edited by Warda. - 13 years ago
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