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Posted: 13 years ago
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Shilpi wonderful update loved it πŸ€—

I loved the entire phone comvo in the beginning it was sooo cute

and then the heart wrenching one about pinky...u noe I've been in that situation at my

placements for uni where i have seen my own patients die while I'm there...and you nailed it...

the emotions he went thru ...his feelings...Naku thinking that pinky must be relieved to be out of the pain ...spot on... very well written...I was thinking of my own experiences reading this...

and Naku knowing what to sat to him ...making him feel better...great shilpi
...I really liked this

part so much ...

ok now about the wedding...I must say the environment seemed negative to me ...πŸ˜•

raining...things falling ...but it could also just be his un interest in the wedding ...i dunno

but alas their married πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜³

aww what a cutie refused to let go of her hand 😳 and all the comments he said to her during

the wedding 😍 love him...

great part shilpi ...looking forward to the next one ... please update soon 😳😊
Edited by dg0628 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
shit :(  ik comment sala ek comment 
insan ko pehlay posittion say dosre pay dal deta hai :(🀒

anyways wah wah shilpi :D

 

Yakeen nahi ata k tum itni merbaan qadardaan ban gaye ho :P

 

one more superb update :D

 

this update was to die for kyu die for ?

 

lets take a look 

 

Ch17: Six Months & Seven Steps

 

what an awesome title :D

so meaningful :D

 

do i need to tell u again and again that u are awesome with tiles:D

 

so Judaai period is start and D is gone 

but all thanks to technology :D

 

D calls every day though he only wants to hear  N :P

but it seems that its just not N but whole family missed D nd  wants to talk to him :P

Love how he is cursing inside and talking to everyone and the way he talks abt Leela nad ended on asking abt N , Dutta is smart :D

 

Ahh shilpi bang on this scene when Kala looks at N and N was concentrating too much !

 

So real , we have done it so many times when we know what is coming nxt and make a innocent face as if we don't know anything ::P

Heheheh though her concentration gai pani me as she was doing all the things wrong way :P

awww love the scene 

 

when N takes phone from Kala and goes to ttheir room ,

best part about this all was D know each and everything she is doing ,

and love love love the way he ask her if she is missing her and she says no

I love the instant reaction of both the lovers :P

It was just too adorable :D

 

And loved that this is her punishment !

 

Love the way they share everything D is telling her abt all the things of his life though she is a small town girl but she understand his everyword and which she don't

He is there to help her !
love their relation !

 

Love N questions to him and D remembering what he eat and jis cigarette !
I doubt agar ye FF kisi cigarette company ko mil gaya they will use as their promotional campaign

 

D aur N main Pyar hamere cigarette ki  wajah say na wo churate na hoti

Ek classical romantic kahani ki shuruvat :P

Jheheheh

********************************************************************************************so wedding its on her way and N is all excited abt it :D

She is here and there

Aww kala she is happy that she is becoming her vaheni but the fact that she treated her as her own responsibility , parting ways with her is very hard

 

And wooo D  anger

Love this part sooo much

U know what I like in this part the most

 

You see jab tak D was with them he had no work and no work relted tensions

But as now he wants N in her life for real ,

Here he is acting real , he was shouting at her !

And that's is life ,

In my opinion some llove marriage fails at this point when u make anyone to join ur lives

Which has its own highs and own lows

There are times I think u will agree with me

You don't want to be someone ,

U rather like to sit alone and thing abt ur life , where u stand where u wnt to go and the way u are moving , will u be there !

 

Here the significance I feel jaise jaise wedding is coming kareeb ,

He is much more open to her in evry sense

That even after marriage there will be cases which will not be successful

And he may lash out at N but why this story is so different is beacsue of N

A completely ordinary girl with extra ordinary tactics !

Love how she make D realize that he is not the one at fault ,

I love the example of moon , he doesn't feared ,

He always has its gory and then it dimishes

And gains again !

 

 

And baby Leela Tai is sahiki elder sister , she is seeing evryting how N tackes D

Though im scred of her but she is just being doing what she is always doing

Thinking and getting best for Dutta !

 

Yahooo wedding is here :D

 

Oh it was raining all the time :D

Heheh love that her sister husband didn't care and dance

Awesome

 

Nad shilpi do u love making ur FF heroes to bmake blunder in ur wedding !
firsr foremost D ek thi kahani un ke pyar, zabardsti shadi aur second shadi sy pehlya dulhan ko nikal diya :P

Hehehhehehe

 

Second chances : na he pocho

 

And D here wah wah chamch gira dia and doing all the blunders :P

Thank god pandit ji shadi nahi chor k agye :P

 

Loved every bit and sindoor

Gosh here the significance of sindoor is totally alag !

 

Love how he fills her maang for real now :D

Love how he ties the MS and says he love her !

And finally when he is holding her hand !

 

Oh shilpiii

 

Love it

 

This story is going strong and strong by every new update :D

Im sooo loving it :D

 


Oh sab say imp baat tu main bhool gaye 

this FF of urs is very shareef but i m not so i want some awesome showseome scenes which i know that u write so well !

cant wait for the next one 

and baby keep up the same  speed :D

 

Edited by kiran255 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Shilpi dear, you are spoiling us. This is the 3rd update in as many days. Hope you are going to keep this pace up!! Oh my gosh...where do I start with the praises?? I loved the phone conversations especially the second one after Dutta lost Pinky. . I felt like I was listening on the other line when they were talking. It's so nice to see that Dutta has become so dependent on Naku. He went from pissed, to despair, to calm all because of Naku and her words. He doesn't need anyone or anything except Naku. Loved their wedding especially the rain soaked groom, the few mishaps and the i love you!!!!Of course it would not be boring and dull. Can we expect a SR update? Soon???? Thanks for the update.

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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG shilpiii...wonderful update..
Im so glad 6 months passed so kwik lol..
But aww pinky.. a little girl died :(
but he sudnt have any attachment wid his patients... varna gadbad ho jayega .. but awww he needed her..n she did soothe him.. with her words and voice..
Finallyyy... Weddingg... But hailaa..itne abshaguns? lool Dutta is so funny n cute.. he dropped the whole spoon in the fire and wanted to help tie the gadhbandhan haha.. poor pandit was fumin awww..
I hope their married life goes fine.. well i cnt waiiittt!! 
I love how he didnt leave her hand.. ofc yaar.. ab pooora haq hai..
Please please please continue sooon :)
 I will give u chocs hehe
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...now they r married
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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: kiran255

shit :(  ik comment sala ek comment 

insan ko pehlay posittion say dosre pay dal deta hai :(🀒


🀣 🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣Oh Man Kiki...ab tujhme Nana patekar ka soul ghus gaya...OMG..u r funny.🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣
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Posted: 13 years ago
Superb shillpi!!!
Loved it n and the phone convo was touching!!!
Glad to c that nakku comforting him n
Now waht do I say about the wedding!!!
Hehehe v funny how he drop the spoon n then put it in the holly water lol !!!
 
lol now the wedding too done!!!
Wonder what next!! hehehe
Thanks for the update dear n sure it made my weekend!!!
Waiting for the next part!!! *blush* hehehe
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  it's  awesome  update  dear...
tasha   n  their  phone  convo  during  6 months  was  superbbb...i  loved  it...
happy  to  read  dutta  comfortableness   with  naku...n  finally  tasha  r  married😳...it  was  nice...looking  fwd...

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Posted: 13 years ago
love the pace at which u r updating and the update is lovely as usual...yay they are married...
Dutta in full form...😊...cant wait for the next one...

Edited by sanya_s - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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🀣Oh Man Kiki...ab tujhme Nana patekar ka soul ghus gaya...OMG..u r funny.🀣


 

oye adhi raat tak jab koi jag kar makhian mar raha ho computer k samnay beth kar 
aur jab jo apna spot res karnay aye aur dekhay someone has already res it !

us main Nana patekar ki he rooh a sakte hai πŸ˜‘

saala mood he kharab kardia raat ko !

done commenting now :😊