FF:Imperfect Perfections Ch32-Pg142(14.4)Last UD - Page 41

I smell fire ... Something is burning ..

Thanks dear for this evening treat

This part gave me stitches, I couldn't stop laughing. Specially,

.Nakkusha shook her head rejecting his gift before he even uttered the words- Mujhe gaaney sunnaney ka shauk nahi hai. thank you. debu chirped in- haan didi ko band bajane ka shauk hai. Kyun bhau? He winked at dutta

The base instrument transistor was the surprise package and well weaved into the lives of all the characters. How do you do it? *sobbing*  It reminded me of Friday holidays when we were kids and my dad on his antique sort of player would tune Indian channel with Lata and Mukesh's tracks. I have kept my late grand ma's self made support cushion with me and her keys (no one cared about those when she was no more), they meant so much to me. I can feel her through those.  

I loved the bang on head Udday ji got from D and the two snobs :)
I assumed his character right. It's better for such men to get hold of smart maids for they don't deserve a better-half. When you cannot touch the chord to her heart how can you claim to keep her happy all your life. Too big claim for a mediocre male.

So, I love the real-time treatment given to Uday Ji aka Bittu. It would have been interesting to see a dialogue with ji.. ji.. and a big bang of words on Udday.

Man I love how D thrashes him down and not to forget the chajje wala scene. Can't imagine a surgeon doing it :) but it was visualized and penned.

  
Edited by inosh - 13 years ago

Edited by Shweta_Dutta - 13 years ago

U updated? And No PM?

Hey Shilpita, wonderful update ,, gripped me ,i  could not leave the page with out completing it ,, very nicely  decribed i could picturise the entire scne , ( wish it was longer 😛)

nice part...... debbu & sonu r so sweet......the pakorawala scene 😆

 

Thank Shilpi !

 

Believe me it feels great to be a Dazzler :P

even my now the color of my  like vote change its green now:P

 

and u dont worry it will take u 608 post to become a dazzler 

hehehheheh

 

First thing first , as i was busy 

Thank god for that 

i missed what Devilish thing u have done 

HOw can i thank AlLah Tallah enough k i didnt read that scary post !

warna my presentation would be a wreck !

 

Thank god u didnt do it ,

really bad joke 

coming to the update !

not coming to the update 

first coming to ur road ride hmm 

going to disc , kya baat hai and wo bhi with Garry !
and whattt u guys lost ur way !
oye dont ever go with anyone who is new , what if tum kho jateee

be careful 

though the ride has given u amaizng title and amazing point to think abt but as if u need them

u can look at empty glass and can decipt a story 

and next time tell ur gang , never to leave u alone warnaaaaa ................

 

Ch12: Crossroads

 

OH My God 

so they are here and its like everyone is liking them :(

kala really is a very good character here , 

 

the way she tell Naku that If Dutta was right for her , she be the first one to ask her hamd ,

but still she have no clue that
Dutta is changing just for Naku

 

OH my my Dutta is in such a bad state

He just have encountered a new feling for Nkau and

Now he is with the ppl who are there to take naku!

 

Love how he is inspecting everything !

And no why Kala is siding those jerksL

And what Naku is sent alone to talk to that Bittu L

No Dutta was on his way and he receive the call of the women

Who was in his mind all wekk but just a ride with naku make him forget her !'NO he cant go for her L

 

And that Bittu he doesn't know how to shut up

What he isthinking ,he wants a wife or maid

Have he ver think how Naku is feeling when he is trying to open his past

And wow She said all what Dutta told her J that's is awesome

And she accepts the rishta not 4 herself but her family  L

Oh today is Dutta bad day , new realization , meeting the ppl he don't want and seeing his own sister complimenting the guy

Ah bad bad and when Naku is gonna give him tea he wants it

But when he thinks Naku is not coming he declines

Awwwwwwww

Bechara !

Bad timing !

Ahh relief Tahs scene !
oh Dutta is in specs , he must be looking so cute <3

Oh love their convo

She asked every question to him and he though took so much he make sure tht she understands !

Amd hmm Meghna gone ,

Thank god

I hope kala also comes to know abt it soon !

And hmm dutta naku covo is just amazing simple , practical and with hope

Though Dutta is not really happy abt her accepting in first go :P

 

And whattttt

Dutta dream gosh he is so in love

She said number of times to stop smoking but he never did but 2day when she is not close he squashed it !

awesome loved it !

hey shilpi,

wow.... another lovely title with an equally lovely update........

D understands N so well......... oh, this uday seems to b a little irritating n very influenced by society n elders sort of thinking!!..... doesnt think by himself🤢........

wil look fwd to ur next update!

tc
divya

OH Miss Shilpi !

 

I can never match up to ur speed cuz ur awesome!

Comingto ch 13 !

First of all awesome title !

 

Understanding You !

Wow and the real meaning of this title is totally understand at the end of this update !

 

Hmm love the start , Naku cleaning

Ah hate this word and work !

But I think she never felt so happy ever after cleaning this time

Oh SHilpi Memories cherish memory ,

And looking at something give u immense pleasure

Takes u to the ride which u have forget or u kjept safe in such a way that u don't visit it too !

Love how she was trying to make the radio work ,

She is remembering her mother memories !
and the transisitors just make her happy !

She is enjoying every thing now !

 

Oh one week gone and Dutta still restless and senseless !

His comfort gone , he is in such a bad state L

And no he yelled at Naku but kya kare he is going through a lot :P

OH that Meghna called thak god he said nooooo !

And yippee he saw nku dancing on terrace and he want to jin her

Love his speed in this matter !

 

OH TUmse MILke

What a song Shilpi ,

Love it

Hmm Naku dancing on this song cuz this is the last movie she w wih her parents and she had no idea this is the song  on which she had her first  dance :P

OH dutta  

He was in mood , he strt the dancing I can totally imagine how it is going !

Wow and ahhhh Nkau realsie something fishy n moved away

Nd Dutta urge heheheh

Bechara

Aw love how Naku tells him tht 

It belongs to her mother and still plays so well

As she is proud of it

And Shipi nevr I read so innocent , lovely bonding od siblings

The way the interact with Dutta nd how happy they are about this little thing :D

 

Arghhhhhhhhh Bittu has nothing to do xcept landing here L

Oh love how they didn't allow Naku to be make them food but try it by themselves !
this is lovely

And arghhh the demon lands in L

Yuck he is such a cheapooo

Hate him

 

I m in love  with Depu

He is awesome !

Loved how he embarrassed that Gaurav :D

And this guy he is so insulting  , every one knows the technology but if they are using it its  their business !
OH evn Dutta left no stone unturned when he asks

Kaise ana hua , is taraf

Ahahhaahh

Love him

And that leech cant he compliment a lil girl !

 

And wooooo wo wooooooo

Dutta just make that leech piss in his pants

He make his point , point of sonu and depu very clear in front of him

Why its always xpected of girl to do all and specially when he knows tat her sibling are young and she is everthing to them !

 

Dutta out class him !

 

Love it love it love it !
and oh MY God last line of Naku !

Why was he not hers who know her well !

And she ask favour from Kanha ji

Who im sure will give best answer!

 

Love it Shilpi

Im on guessing spree that what song wil be played 1

Amazing update !

Powerful , joyful and impact ful

 

Way to goooooooooo :D

Edited by kiran255 - 13 years ago

loved the part........................