Shilpiiiiiiiii !
Kya kahon u updated the same day of ur last update !
but u pmed in the morning !
Shilpi tum aise tu na thi
but all maaf cuz this is what i call a real VICTORy update !
it was a pleasure reading it ,
ur one update makes me go in sad mood and another makes me jump like bandar :P
hehehhehhehheh
LOveeeeeee it !
NOw let me tell u what i felt like reading ur TUg of war Chap eleven :P
OMG satrt he itna intense that ,
Dutta on phone with Mehgna and Naku coming with tea :P
its been a week this is all going like this
oh my Naku she is fuming with anger ,
the most amaizng pat of naku here is her rebel thoughts which i adore !
she is getting angry that Dutta used her to kill his time and i second u
howmuch u make urself ready for but when it actual happens it much more happiness or saddness in both cases !
OH Naku have got guts , not only she is listening to Dutta MEghna concvo
she has guts to ask kala abt Meghna not directly but still !
she is totally different person from what she is showing to others !
and OH Naku doesnt know abt all these fancy words Fb , tweeting and the baddest thing is she even cant ask too :P
and OH Dutta asking Meghna for a date in front Of Naku
thank gos she didnt break his phone
:P
hmm Dutta stopped her so Dutta do miss her
her talks her total new way of thinking
definitely a good sign :D
and wooooo Naku outburst at him
and even mentioned abt cigarette !
and Dutta still have questions !
at times boys are fool !
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a new day a new beginning hmm
Naku back at Kala place ,kya kare all her life she is connected to this place
not just emotional wise but even when they need anything !
hmm so kala is making Dutta to get her haar !
hmm and whats going in Dutta mind is to how to make up with Naku :D
good boy :P
and what dutta decides to go on abike
wooooooooooooooooo
and as stubborn he is , he get the keys !
and wo i was so missing Dutta Naku fight !
naku definitely have claws :P
she never feared him she always fight back with him !
but Dutta is Dutta
he know how to mend his way !
OH she used kala and tells he want a gift for mEhgna
and then ask to take Naku with him !
oops Kala definitely on the wrong spot !
and then she give in !
definitely good things at readers part but my Naku she has given the most honest nd practical answer to kala !
Dutta just cant get everything because he wants so !
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yahoo Bike ride with Dutta , on highway :D
lucky Naku !
ahhhhhhhhhh Naku doesnt know to sit and the way Dutta make her sit
and ask her aur paas- aur - aur
my heart beat was rising as she was slipping near Dutta
and then she put her hand on Dutta shoulders and what Dutta do take herhand and put it at his chest
Its a
picture perfect scene !
and they reach the place
hmm Dutta told her its just a bahana !
but she is asweety she said take gift for mehna !
hmm and sales man becharaaaa got scolded By dutta !
though he was just doing his duty :P
and hmm Dutta naku in mall !
He is enjoying , doing and feeling good about everything he does with Naku !
and naku she is such a cutie she wwants to see the malla nd also tells Dutta k they can have the gift from there !
smart Girl !
hmm so Naku do make Dutta get a gift for meghna :(
hate it
and Dutta Naku in foodcourt !
Maku do love to cook
not only she impressed Dutta by her choice of food but the way she asks him that she willa sk the cook abt the receipe !
Top Chef in making :P
and OH dutta didnt forget abt her gifts
he bought her te gift she adores most !
and the way he says she cooks and he eats (Dutta this is all what we all want but not just for now but for whole life of u and Naku :)
and OMGGGGGGGGGGG
naku sleeping and leaning on Dutta
and Dutta having all besharam khayalssssssss !
best part when he realized what he is thinking he sped away
hahhahahh its a mental game
which makes one numb !
and the way u described he holds her hand and put it on his chest !
woooooooooo Love it !
Ah party over DN back in the town
Naku back to herslelf'
and wow wow wow
the way u described the setting of the scene !
the sun in HOrizon , new Dutta ,
uncomfortable gaze !
Woooooooooooooooo
and then whatt
no way Bittu cant be here !
Dutta do something dudeeeee !
Kalaa open ur eyes and see these 2 !
Love it shilpiiiiiiiiiiiii !
i want a new updateeeeeee !
this one just make me head over heels
superbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb
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