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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey Shilpi !

How u doing Honey !

everythings fine , im doubtiing something is going on full swing in ur life 

cuz if not how can u write with such an amzing speed and enrapturing updates !

The update is so thrlling , i enjoyed every bit of it :D

its a kick ass update :P

Love it 

 

Ch6: Fire & Ice

 

What a title 

i got a mysterious smile on my face !

i know u are something big this time , something captivating 

and indeed you did that !

 

Wow Chess indeed game of technique and as a guy of ca;culation , he must have enjoyed this game !
duttta life here is very simple and yet very complicated !

He has only  two things in life which matters him the most !
one is his four sisters , who he loves a lot and didn't want to hurt them and second is his career where he wants to xcel !

 

Now suddenly his life is upside down !

At the place he couldn't have expected plus by a girl so fragile !
he is doing the things he couldn't have imagined o doing !
Its like its totally anew xperience !
he is not just enjoying it he is loving it and loving the way she is palying along :p

 

Nakusha Shukla the name he was hearing day and night but how they describe her he couldn't have thought it could be Naku doing the stealing

Ahahhahahha

Im so loving it !

 

He is getting so much interested in knowing Naku cuz sometime she is as brave as a lion kicking a guy thriple of her size and some time as a scared mouse :P

He so want to know what running her mind or may bge has got it !

The way u described he saw her claws :P

So Naku is officially on Dutta 's mind 24 /7 right now :d

 

Hahahhah Love Dutta playing little pranks !

And that's the uniqueness of Uf FF !
he doesn't plan something huge
1he is giving her sweet poison:P

He asked naku to get her phone and waited and waited But naku is super heroine here !
she not only stays calm , she got Dutta off guard by putting 2 spoons on salt in his tea :p

Love it !
its like  Dutta is playing with a seasoned player here :P

Love naku blabbering after he accused of her putting salt in his tea !

Kala did well scolding with Dutta

And the last line

Wohoooooooo

Its awesome :P

"Ye lo kuch meetha kha lo..aapka muh karwa ho gaya ho ga naa!..waise karela aur kitna karwa hoga?"

 

Hahhahahah Hilarious :P

 

Well this thing is quite sure Dutta to win get blinded sometime
naku is right he doesn't care it was may be done by Naku but it was her sister love for him !

But he least bothered about it L

 

Love Dutta counter attack he renove all the covers and it was now Naku to be scolded by kala !

A very cute scene beside she got scolded on something she didn't do but

Its so old school athat even neighbor can scold u for doing wrong things !

 

And the way then kala Manofy Naku by makin them all eat ice cream !

Aw I miss old stories my mommy tell about gr8 neighbors !

 

Hahhahahah stoney rice !

Bechara Dutta nevr have imagined hehas to drink salted tea , stony rice by just challenging a small town girl :P

And Love DUtta thoughts when Kala nd all talk sweetly about naku !

His replies in his mind are hilarious !

 

Love their cross fire !
im so proud of Naku for doing this all !

Plus I am so proud and doubting u !
how can u come with  these amazing ideas !

I hope u are not victim of any of these ideas of urs !
cuz they definitely are  non violent but very irritating :P

 

You know I think its not Just Dutta who is having a great time , he is been busy in his hi fi life he love being thinking of strategies by which he can make the girl get in angry !

Its so not him , I think even if Naku gives his bottle he will not stop from making Naku angry !

Its like he looks foreard to irritate her and so want to know

How will she react?

Its indeed an addiction :P

Na even ON Naku part she is not like this to any stranger But its like she is niot scared of this guy ,s he also is enjoying his lilttle pranks and gets ready to see what he is up to this time !

And last ahem ahem Dutta tu thora over ho rraha hai :P

Well shilpi how can u come with this dialogue !
I imagined it and LMao :PP

"filhaal to naak-muh se dhuan chodta bail lag rahe ho."

Hehehehheheh

 

And wo Dutta reacted in the bad way !

But Naku reaction is the one I love !

Good job !

 

Thank u shilpi for not making Dutta angry that Naku throwed water to his face !

I hate if it goes like "

Ye Dr Dutta patil kay muh peh pehla aur akhri pani ka glass hai :P

 

Ahahahah but shilpi is unpredictable !

Love this thing about u !

Reading the whole update

Only ione song was running in my mind

"Chote ungli pay nachaye ge tumhay

She is a small twon girl "

 

Thank u shilpi !
I laughed genuinely !

Its amazing and thak u for giving me amazing ideas now no one can irritate me !

Love it !

I know honey I am late with the comment but wants to read it agin and comment !
loved it honey !

 

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Posted: 13 years ago
@ Kiran:

Chote ungli pay nachaye ge tumhay

She is a small town girl

Thats the song i was listening to while writing...hai na co-incidence!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

When will u do the next update? Expecting ur update soon.

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Posted: 13 years ago
@Shilpi wow what a co-incidence :D
But no doubt the song is so apt for them :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved your update and particularly their pranks!! Update soon yaar!! Your stories get under my skin and make me an addict in no time!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update. Waiting for the next one.
Am loving the flow of the FF.
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG .... pranks... thats soo adorable ๐Ÿ˜ณ Great concept.. n lovely update dear..!! Thanks a ton...!!

Wish u a very Happy Holi ๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi shilpi๐Ÿค—

awesome update yaar๐Ÿ˜ƒ... luv dis Tasha nokjhok๐Ÿ˜...wow superbbb๐Ÿ‘... each n evry prank ws awesome...he  burned curtains...n Nakku...omg salt in a tea... ohh poor D..he drunk dat tea๐Ÿ˜†... she behave soo inocent infront of Kalawathi๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†... he removed dat cover... luv her Amrish puri comment... omg he sed supergal hai... really she maintained very well๐Ÿ˜‰ ...ohh D's mouthful of stones๐Ÿ˜†... soo she did it๐Ÿ˜†... he ws soo sure to bet his medical liecence that jamaidada or tai would not have bit on the stones at any cost. ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ‘
ewwww he put cockrooch๐Ÿ˜ฒ... n even help her...ohh she sed...'thank you' to his kind act by sending his medical journals for a swim in the bath tub..๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†dis ws superbb....๐Ÿ‘ ohh Nakku awesome gal... luv her comment "naak-muh se dhuan chodta bail"...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜†
omg D pushed the cigarette in her mouth..dats not gud yaar... but ...she is really brave... threw water...awesome gal๐Ÿ‘...now D is getting interesting vacation... hun hun kyun nahi...๐Ÿ˜‰...awesome update shilpi...loved it... lyk always dear...u describe evrything ws really perfect๐Ÿ‘...thnks for pm sweety take care...๐Ÿ˜Š

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Posted: 13 years ago
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๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ, loved the pranks they played on each other lol it was hilarious. how do you come up with all this shilpi you're amazingly brilliant!๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘.  hope they become friends soon, it was sweet of Dutta to call for a truce ๐Ÿ˜ณ. loved it to bits thanks fro the pm. xx
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Posted: 13 years ago
shilpi ๐Ÿ˜‰
sorry dear for the late comment๐Ÿ˜ณ
was out the whole weekend๐Ÿ˜ƒ
 
wah waht a cat and mouse game this is, like always the mouse is wining,๐Ÿ˜†  I mean like tom and jerry ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

I like this stage and like preety pointed out,๐Ÿ˜ณ

 its Nakku is whining at the end!!๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†

 

Whill wait for the next part , thanks for the PM๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿค—