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Sweet_Ashum IF-Dazzler

Joined: 17 March 2010
Posts: 2805

Posted: 13 March 2011 at 8:15am | IP Logged
Bacha's grown up it seems
*wiping tears*
LOL  That was philosophical!
The last line esp held a lot of meaning
Would love to know more of ur thoughtsSmile
Thanks for the PM
Take care

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MysticalRealm IF-Dazzler

Joined: 25 August 2007
Posts: 4119

Posted: 13 March 2011 at 8:26am | IP Logged


@ stargaze94 hey dude! Thanx so much for your response I am truly ecstatic that you love it. N ya the last line was my fav too!!


@ sacred shrine (Sab)  OMG!! Immaa so glad you commented! Really I was waiting for your input like badly!! N I noe sometimes I think imam freak coz of the philosophical views that come to me! Lol N yeah I guess imam too mature?? But imam glad we think alike!! Sort – of lol!! N thnnx so much for the reponse Sabrina!!


@ samaira97 Thannnxx Sam!!! It was wonderful hearing from you as youre a wonderful writer a well!!


@ Mel di…… Thannnxx so much di!! I amm so glad you commented! Your views really mean a lot to me! Hearing such a wonderful writer means so much!! N I am so happy you liked it!!!


@ kriyaaa jaan!!  Heeyy bbsz!! Yaar kya kare meri philosophical side ko chuppa ke rakh na chahti thi lekin aakhir aahi gayyi tere saamne!! Lol n Imma sure my Kriyaa is very philosophical too!! N I love you di!!! Tnnnxx for the comment!!!


@ 268143!!  Heyyaa thnnx for liking it!! Your support is what means the most!!


@ -shamima- heyyaa Shamima!! Thnnx so much!! N wow you rite a journal?? That's so cool dude!! I never have the patience for that stuff!! But really thnnxx so much!!

@ Ashhu DI!!!  OMFG!!! DI long time no seee!! I missed you like crazzy!! N yeah man you see what ur disapperance has done to your jinzi?? Yaarr todhi zyada badi ho gayyi hai?? lol thhhnnxx di!! Means so much!! Immaa glad the last line came out well!!

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MysticalRealm IF-Dazzler

Joined: 25 August 2007
Posts: 4119

Posted: 13 March 2011 at 8:41am | IP Logged


Edited by Klutszy_KaShian - 20 May 2011 at 10:15pm

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anumeha_rajat IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 12 February 2010
Posts: 10172

Posted: 13 March 2011 at 4:26pm | IP Logged

hey that was really nice yaar...

very beautifully written...........

do write more.........

thxn for the pm..................

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Xiahtic-5 IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 07 March 2009
Posts: 29255

Posted: 13 March 2011 at 6:18pm | IP Logged
Waow beautiful yaar really touching amd amazing

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-shamima- IF-Dazzler

Joined: 20 August 2010
Posts: 2883

Posted: 13 March 2011 at 6:32pm | IP Logged
Awe the sorry one was so beautifully written I mean it shows how someone can apologise out of sincerity and innocence when it's no fault of their own but they don't see it and the person who made the mistake realise the depth of that person and how much they mean to them but only when they're gone and awe the second one about geets love towards maan is also nicely written but generally how love is such a beautiful feeling it isn't something that can be bought but only felt and like geet fell in love with maan and his heart not his money and power anyways another great update Smile

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nightstar IF-Rockerz

Joined: 12 March 2008
Posts: 6247

Posted: 13 March 2011 at 10:08pm | IP Logged
Hey jinil...
I loved the frst one more ...probably bcz the second one had some other name than kash so i cldnt imaginewwell...dnno..but it was gud..i m sure maneetians wd love it..
As 4th first one, it actually made me feel a point i felt like getting in there and get  things sorted...grabbbing the two of them together and make them face to face, wait 4them to confess thier faults...or rather the narrator's fault...
But alas!!!i u gotta pay me a penalty...u have written it so u have to write another one whch will NOT  be cont of ths scene, it will simply be one whr they will reconcile..umm maybe u describe a scene whr they are hugging...
For the readers it will be  scene, but for  me it will be continuation of the first one...
Since the couples are unnamed, for me they are i cannot see them getting apart....u ggat  write  me a "i am sorry i love u" scene...

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Euphoria. IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 23 September 2009
Posts: 14493

Posted: 14 March 2011 at 1:52am | IP Logged
wow i am actually amazed .. it is very different from the norm! 
i am really liking the style and i like your story development as well! 
do pm me when you update next ... thanks!
anu Big smile

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