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BitterSweet LoveStory Thread 2 MG FF (Page 78)

Shalve IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 27 March 2011 at 3:21am | IP Logged
wow...superb..awesome...loved it....

-afsha- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 27 March 2011 at 3:23am | IP Logged
That was so awesum update
Maan had gone fully bonkers having Geet in his arms
He lost his control n did that wat he wuldnt dream of dng witout her agreement
Becahri Geet
She is facing the real world now
Loved how she was rationalising all thgs
Let that be kiss or forgiving Maan
Maan was asking her to kiss him n she did
Maan is changing for sure
Evn i wanna tell u one thg
I love u tooWink
RageOfAnAngel IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 27 March 2011 at 3:31am | IP Logged

Well the first part was Blushing . Guess the gr8 MSK was unable to contain his feelings any longer  Embarrassed . Geet's reaction was justified ; I could totally relate with her ,when you are in such a compromising situation that too alone in a jungle slapping a guy is a bad idea . So Geet ran as I'm sure most of us would do .
Here we knew it was Maan who would not do any lowly act with anyone let alone Geet . Approve

But in the next part the thugs forced Geet even then she struggled to break free & flee ; not confront those unless you are an ace in martial arts . Ermm

The confrontation of Geet & Maan was fabulous . Geet lucidly told Maan that he was wrong . Again the Maan Singh Khurana apologised . I  LOVED that Geet accepted his apology & sensed the difference in his touch & realized that even though he got a bit carried away yet he saved her life & honour . Thumbs Up

All these aspects came across flawlessly Star 
Lamba chauda update isiliye waise lambe lambe comments LOL
Sowwie if I bored you but could not stop myself from writing what I felt .

BRILLIANT update ...  Clap     Clap     Clap

meghaparti IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 27 March 2011 at 3:32am | IP Logged
Thanks for sharing.....Wow indeed an enjoyable update..seems like maan is possessed by geet's wonder he had no control over himself n kept demanding for a kiss...but the best part was geet forgave him n kissed him on his cheek n maan is really cute asking him to promise not to do such a thing without getting permission from that gal.... awee n how maan agreed as if he wouldnt he would loose something which is so precious to him...seems like a beginning of a love story...Pls. continue...will be waiting for the next update n would like to see  pari telling geet that what she is feeling for maan is loveLOL

Edited by meghaparti - 27 March 2011 at 3:33am
Loquacious_Aash IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 27 March 2011 at 3:45am | IP Logged

did i ever mention b4 that u r meannnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!!AngryAngryAngry 

and kanjoos n enjoy torturing ppl!!!LOLLOLLOLLOL
but loved the update........LOLLOLLOL
the catch word was "u will never do this with ANY OTHER  girl right???"WinkWinkWinkWinkWink
u are sooo evil..LOLLOLLOLLOL
but me loving itBig smileBig smileBig smile

Edited by aashluvsmaan - 27 March 2011 at 3:47am
nahtani88 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 27 March 2011 at 3:55am | IP Logged
mind blowing
cont soon
rupzloveu IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 27 March 2011 at 4:00am | IP Logged
                loved it.......
doosheeka Goldie

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Posted: 27 March 2011 at 4:20am | IP Logged
awesome update..........................continue soon...............................

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