BitterSweet LoveStory Thread 2 MG FF - Page 75

Hmmm....Whatay date...Maan is going on a date and poor Geet has no clue at all...Maan has fallen for her like tonne of bricks....You should make Geet realise a bit too...she did in the last couple of updates- she felt safe with him etc etc...but maybe a bit more...maybe we need to introduce a jealousy angle here

WOWWWWW MUSKI WOWWWWWWWWWW

Guys . . . it has not even been a week since they met . . . i am sorry but Yash and Maan encounter as some of you want will take time . . . if you feel i am taking the story too slow please let me know but still Yash and Maan encounter will only happen once maan realises he is in love with her . . . please bear with me . . . i have things planned and i wish to continue it that way . . . it its boring please let me know i will change a few things . . .

 

dont change the pace its going fairly nice

and write what you have planned and the way you have planned

dont ever ditter, you are going nicely and wisely

and no Yash Maan encounter needed

they can always meet once Geet relises her love and Maan his

no hurry

 

lovely update
Maan is in mood of date,Geet is so sweet with her innocence,nd her own rules from her own world.
Wonderful sweety!!!
BTW i too commented b4 1st.

hmmm well it was a good one 

Originally posted by: josh.pooja

hmmm well it was a good one 

but one complain u r becoming lazy in this days to send pm u didnt send for the bridge also hope this is small complain 

i will send PMs for all 4 FFs together . . . i am writting TL once that is done i will PM😆

Originally posted by: 7thHeaven

Hi darling . . . you wnated one update i am giving four plus a surprise . . .😆 just wait . . .

sachi??😛 waiting😃
and coming to the update i loved it to the core!
friendship rules were cute but did they apply only to maan or vice versa? ask eet and tell me!🤣
and she comparing him with pari?😆 am sure munda will show her the movie if she does it again!!😆
Geet throwing her arms and asking him not to leave her ever again was so dreamy... like maan,i loved it too😆!

awesome update

Thanks for sharing ...awee Geet is so cute dear...n maan..he is having a time of his life with geet in the jungle..Pls. post the Next part soon😆