M&G: Mr Iyer & Mrs Khurana - CLOSED - Page 15

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Hasini.....am in love with your FF! It's just superb! It's so much fun.....lolz. Maan is such a tease.....and even Geet harboured some feelings for him.....unaware of his identity though. Their back story is amazing.....cute. At the end of the auto ride, Maan gave away that he used to help her with her studies. The way you pen it.....you make it all the more interesting! The auto driver must have had a great time.....lmao. Finally, Geet saw the real Maan.....lovely update that was! Can't wait for them to be alone.....do continue soon.

Here I thought that just being married was enough .. you notched it up by inter-caste and that too arranged ' Aha!

I can imagine.. Geet's family doing Balle Balle at the reception ...and Maan eating Idly with Jelly'😆

Edited by -Aarya- - 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 6thElement

I will be updating in another 20 mts...This is the last part of..."The importance of being earnest" Then as pixie said, the marriage starts.

I am so sorry I could not stay up anymore and I hit the bed. When I got back this morning I was so lucky to get three updates. Thank you soo much . You are such an angel and a sweetheart.

Part 5
Geet's recollection of him and her puking was hilarious. She put Maan in a spot when she wanted to come wherever he is going.But our genius talked her into thinking again before making a decision and she was convinced. Wow all that was soo good. He gave a clue of his identity back. Nice part
part 6
Dhoti scene was so funny . None of the brainies could figure out how to put it on right. But the best part was jeans under and belt over it. Actually my brother used to do it .Not jeans under but always belt over the dhoti to save him from embarrassment. Cute part.
part 7
The marriage. You described the event so well. It was nostalgic. She must be really courageous to look at his face after all the events. She still chose to look and froze instead of screaming. That part was too good. And the way she decided to tease as a punishment was awesome.Their game of teasing and touching was really sweet.

Thank you for such wonderful updates.🤗
Edited by Ramhari - 13 years ago

I Love Love this concept!!! nowadays our real as in "reel" Geet is so sad and heart wrenching that I read this FF of urs to cheer up!
Thank you😊

I want this to have a Love Button...The Best I have EVER read!👏 THANK YOU sooooo much!

sorry what is dhoti  dont know

anything about it but  i'm loving the story

even dont much about

hindi constume i'm learning

dont get me wrong because

i wasnt born in  india so just

went vacation once

fabulous update

pls cont soonnnnnnnnn

 

 

wow the wedding was

beautiful cant wait when

she find his real identity

of maan super duper

update pls cont soonnnn

thanks pm

Part 2 - Its very cute....

Part -  3 just started reading....