Kriya on Holi (a short story ) Part 3 on pg 13 - Page 12

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Posted: 13 years ago
surbhi
i m ☺️
i m speechless
 
👏👏😳😳⭐️
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg... omg... omg....
kya scene hain yaara... i was ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️... couldnt stop....
 
lovely absolutely lovely....
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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: Mitaly..

surbhi

i m ☺️
i m speechless aww kucho toh bolboo 
 
⭐️thankssss

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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: kriya_sruthi

omg... omg... omg....

kya scene hain yaara... i was ☺️... couldnt stop....ah i m happyy the intimates cne had such an impactt on u..i myself was blushing while writing the last partt 😳
 
lovely absolutely lovely....thankssss

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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: Eden_luvsKriya

Wow surbhi I neve knew u write so well....it was jus awesomeeeee...thankss eden ...lubd it veryy much. Pratigya was behaving sooo cutely n d way Krishna was handling her was so sweet. the funniest part was when she askd Krish humara bacha kab ayega😆..hahaha ...yeahh even i lubbed this part the mostt ..something crazzy and innocentt ..so innocent....Pratigya wid a gun..wow so unbelievable..🤣..n Kriya romance on d road in d rain....waah waah....u really made my day.....i m glad i made u so happyy ..keep up d gud work...lub u n lub Kriya/Arja ofcourselubb u too ....lubb krishnaa 😃

 
Wish d Mahaepi would hav been sumthing lyk dis.......it would b tough 4 all of us 2 get out of Lalaland(who wants 2,thou)yeahh the promo has scared me ..i justt dont want krishna to do any mistakee ..cvs plss be fair to his character

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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: shumi.

hey....surzzz..hii shumii dii.tum tho fir se chaaagayeeeeeeeeeeee😃....ek dum lalan top...👏thankss diiii😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
SURBHIIIIIIIII...EE KA KIYA TUMNE...MUJHE BEHOSH KAR DIYA?SURBHI EM STILL UNDER D EFFECT OF UR STORY N HOW CAN U DO DIS...?END IT SO SOON?HOW CNAN U DO DIS SURBHI...EM SOOOO IN LOVE WID UR FF...OMG I JUST LUBB DIS BHAANG WAALI PRAATIGYA...SO CUTE CHUBBY N BUBBLY...N D WAY SHE TALKS...ESP D BACCHA WAALI BAAT...AWWWW I JUST LUBBD IT...ESP WEN SHE ASKED 'HAMRA BACHAA KAB AYEGA'...N I JUST LUBD IT WEN KRISHU SAID 'KAASH TUM YE TAB KEHTI JAB TUM APNI HOSH MEIN HOTI ' N ALSO 'AYYE BABU HUMARA BACHA BAHUT JALDI AAYEGA'...HOW I WISH DAT IT HAPPENS SOON IN DA SERIAL...WHY CANT UU CONTINUE DIS SURBJIII?PLS CONTINUE NNAA!PLSSSSS MERI BAAT MAANO SURBHI!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: shrutisinha

nic yrrrrr

thankss shrutii
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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: Amit_Mehra

gud one surbhi luved it that pichkari scene was too gud ro thanx for this beautiftl story

thanks amit for likingg the scness
and i m just lubbing to write theses ff and storiess ...its my pleasuree
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Posted: 13 years ago
Surbzz,
kaa bey?u blushing?na na na. .it ws me hu ws blushing as though fel into a kumkum box. .kaa baat hai!omg!!sooo roman tic n intense!!hamein maar dala. .